旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本表达了“不喜欢坐窗边，因为更喜欢靠近入口”的观点，但语法和用词问题较多。应使用“I don’t prefer to sit...”或更自然的“I prefer not to sit...”；“when I cross”不符合语境，可以改为“when I travel”；“great sceneries”应改为“beautiful scenery”，“scenery”通常不可数。此外，although和however不能同时使用，“rush times of juicing of force rooms”意思不清，可能想表达“方便去洗手间”或“上下车更方便”。建议先直接回答，再用because补充一个清晰、具体的理由。

範例: I prefer not to sit by the window when I travel. Although the view can be beautiful, I usually choose a seat near the entrance because it is easier to get on and off the vehicle. It is also more convenient when I need to use the restroom.

建議: 回答直接表示了“是”，但时间表达和句子结构不自然。“visit Japan in frequently”应改为“used to visit Japan frequently”或“we once took a trip to Japan”；“in a long January ranging from one week”无法清楚表达旅行时长，可以说“during a long winter holiday”或“the trip lasted about a week”；“This week consists of a lot of destinations”应改为“The trip included several destinations”。建议补充与家人同行的具体细节，例如去了哪些地方、旅行持续多久，以及这次旅行给你的感受，并使用“during”“because”或“also”等连接词。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a week-long trip to Japan during the winter holiday. We visited several cities, including Tokyo and Kyoto, and tried lots of local food. I remember it clearly because it was my first trip abroad with my family.

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

一般现在时的否定句需要使用助动词“do”。主语是“I”，所以应使用“do not”或“don't”，不能直接说“I not prefer”。此外，“travel”比“cross”更符合“旅行”的语境。建议掌握一般现在时否定句结构：主语 + do/does not + 动词原形。

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

“scenery”通常是不可数名词，不能使用复数形式“sceneries”来表示一般的景色，应使用“scenery”。“window”在这里指座位旁的特定窗户，使用单数更自然。建议注意不可数名词通常不加复数词尾“-s”。

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

“scenery”是不可数名词，因此要使用“There is”，而不是“There are”。There be句型中，be动词要根据后面的名词决定：不可数名词或单数名词用“There is”，复数名词用“There are”。

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

“although”和“however”不能在同一个让步结构中同时使用。“although”后面直接接主句即可；如果使用“however”，则应另起一个独立句。建议使用“Although ..., ...”或“..., however, ...”，不要重复表达让步关系。

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

“near”本身可以直接作介词，通常不需要再加“to”，所以应说“near the entrance”，而不是“near to entrance”。表示某段持续时间时，也应使用“for”，例如“for a week”。

× I not prefer sit by windows when I cross because although there are great sceneries nearby windows, however, due to rush times of juicing of force rooms, I prefer to sit near to entrance.

✓ I don't prefer to sit by the window when I travel because, although there is beautiful scenery outside the window, I prefer to sit near the entrance during rush hour.

“window”和“entrance”在这里都指具体的窗户和入口，因此前面需要使用定冠词“the”。应说“the window”和“the entrance”，不能省略冠词。

× Yes, I used to visit Japan in frequently in a long January ranging from one week. This week consists of a lot of destinations.

✓ Yes, I used to visit Japan frequently in January, and one trip lasted about a week. The trip included many destinations.

“frequently”是频度副词，不应放在介词“in”之后形成“in frequently”。它通常放在实义动词前面，因此应说“visit Japan frequently”。建议记住：频度副词通常位于主语之后、主要动词之前。

× Yes, I used to visit Japan in frequently in a long January ranging from one week. This week consists of a lot of destinations.

✓ Yes, I used to visit Japan frequently in January, and one trip lasted about a week. The trip included many destinations.

月份前通常使用介词“in”，例如“in January”，但“in frequently”没有语法意义。“持续一周”应表达为“for about a week”或“lasted about a week”，而不是“ranging from one week”。

× Yes, I used to visit Japan in frequently in a long January ranging from one week. This week consists of a lot of destinations.

✓ Yes, I used to visit Japan frequently in January, and one trip lasted about a week. The trip included many destinations.

问题询问的是童年时期的过去经历，因此描述这次旅行时应使用过去时。“consists”是一般现在时，应改为过去时“included”。“lasted”也用于描述过去某段时间的持续长度。