旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接表达了“喜欢靠窗座位”，但存在明显的词汇和语法问题。这里的“when I'm trying”应改为“when I'm travelling”，“see the video outside the window”应改为“enjoy the view outside the window”，“remember the way I come here”可以改为“remember the route”，而“receive there again”应改为“visit the place again”。建议使用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体感受，例如欣赏风景或独自探索目的地。答案控制在2—3句即可，避免重复使用“I want to”。

範例: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat because I enjoy looking at the scenery outside. It also helps me remember the route, and I can plan to visit interesting places again on my own.

建議: 回答有明确的经历和具体地点，但时态不一致。因为问题询问童年经历，应使用一般过去时，例如“had”“visited”“arrived”“visited”。“by the train”应改为“by train”，“local test”应改为“local food”或“local dishes”。最后一句存在重复和句子结构混乱的问题，可以用“After that”或“Besides”连接参观大学和品尝美食，并说明这次旅行为什么令人难忘。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a long train journey to Hong Kong. We visited the University of Hong Kong and tried some delicious local dishes, so it was a very memorable trip.

× Yes, I have a long journey with my family.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family.

问题发生在过去，因为考官使用了“Did you have...?”询问童年经历，所以回答应使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”。

× We arrived there by the train.

✓ We arrived there by train.

表示乘坐某种交通工具时，固定表达是“by + 交通工具”，通常不使用定冠词“the”。因此应说“by train”，而不是“by the train”。

× We arrived there by the train and we visit the University of Hong Kong.

✓ We arrived there by train and we visited the University of Hong Kong.

“arrived”使用了一般过去时，但“visit”仍是一般现在时。由于这是童年时发生的旅行，两个动作都应使用一般过去时，所以“visit”应改为“visited”。

× and also it's enjoying the local test enjoying local delicious food.

✓ We also enjoyed tasting the delicious local food.

原句缺少清晰的主语和正确的谓语结构，并且“it's enjoying”不能正确表达“我们享用了……”。应使用主语“We”加过去式谓语“enjoyed”，使句子结构完整、清楚。

× and also it's enjoying the local test enjoying local delicious food.

✓ We also enjoyed tasting the delicious local food.

这段内容描述的是过去在香港旅行时发生的事情，因此“enjoy”应使用一般过去时“enjoyed”，而不能使用现在进行时形式“is enjoying”。

× and also it's enjoying the local test enjoying local delicious food.

✓ We also enjoyed tasting the delicious local food.

动词“enjoy”后面通常接名词或动名词（动词-ing形式）。因此应说“enjoyed tasting”，表示“享受品尝……”，不能使用原句中不完整且重复的“enjoying”。

× and also it's enjoying the local test enjoying local delicious food.

✓ We also enjoyed tasting the delicious local food.

英语中表达观点或感受的形容词通常放在表示地点或来源的形容词前面。因此应说“delicious local food”，而不是“local delicious food”。