旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本表达了“不喜欢坐窗边”的观点，但没有直接说明“go outside”与旅行方式的关系，而且“play together with my keys”应为“play with my kids”或“spend time with my friends”。“sit just sit”是重复错误。建议先用清晰的主题句回答，再补充一个具体原因，并使用“because”连接；如果是在交通工具上旅行，也可以说“look out of the window”，而不是“go outside”。

範例: No, I don’t particularly like sitting by the window when I travel. I prefer to move around and explore different places because I enjoy experiencing new scenery up close. For example, when I visit a new city, I would rather walk around and take photos than spend the whole journey looking out of the window.

建議: 回答包含了“小时候没有长途旅行”和“家庭经济条件有限”这两个相关信息，但句子结构混乱，重复表达“没有钱”，并且最后的“but now”没有完成，导致答案不完整。应使用过去时和正确的可数名词形式，例如“we didn’t take many long journeys”和“we couldn’t afford them”。建议按照“直接回答—原因—现在的变化”组织内容，并用“because”和“however”连接。

範例: No, I didn’t take many long journeys with my family when I was a child. We didn’t have much money, so we couldn’t afford to travel very far. However, we have more opportunities to travel now, and we occasionally take trips together during holidays.

× I don't like to sit just sit by the window.

✓ I don't like to just sit by the window.

句子中重复使用了两个 sit，导致结构错误。一个动词不定式结构中不需要重复动词。可以说 “like to just sit” 或 “like just sitting”。

× I didn't have such long journey with my family.

✓ I didn't go on such a long journey with my family.

可数名词 journey 表示一次具体的长途旅行时，前面需要使用冠词 a。固定表达是 “go on a journey”，所以应说 “go on such a long journey”。

× because we didn't have much money they didn't much money at the very time

✓ because we didn't have much money. We didn't have much money at that time.

原句把两个句子直接连在一起，缺少句号或连接词，造成句子结构错误。另外， “didn't much money” 缺少动词 have。应改为完整句子 “We didn't have much money”。

× they didn't much money

✓ we didn't have much money

前文的主语是说话者和家人，应该使用第一人称复数代词 we，而不是 they。同时，didn't 后面需要接动词原形 have。

× don't have this chance

✓ didn't have this chance

这个经历发生在过去，前文使用了 When I was a child，因此这里也应该使用一般过去时。否定形式应为 “didn't have”，而不是现在时 “don't have”。

× to have the long journey

✓ to take a long journey

这里指的是一次并不特定的长途旅行，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是定冠词 the。此外，英语中更自然的搭配是 “take a journey” 或 “go on a journey”。

× We didn't have this chance to have the long journey but now

✓ We didn't have the chance to take a long journey then, but we can travel more now.

原句以 but now 结尾，意思没有完整表达，而且多个分句缺少清晰的连接和标点。应补充完整的主语和谓语，例如 “but we can travel more now”。