旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và thì (sử dụng đúng thì hiện tại đơn: 'I enjoy' thay vì 'I enjoyed'), chú ý số nhiều/ít và cấu trúc câu (‘on long trips’), mở rộng câu chủ đề và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách dùng từ nối (because, so, for example) để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, on long bus trips I like to see mountains and small villages pass by, which helps me relax and pass the time.

建議: Sửa ngữ pháp và dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp (‘we went to many places’ thay vì ‘had gone’), chỉnh lỗi số nhiều (‘places’), và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (địa điểm, hoạt động, kỉ niệm) kèm từ nối (for example, because, then) để câu trả lời giàu nội dung hơn.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child we went on several long trips together, for example to the beach and to historical towns. I remember visiting a coastal city where we spent hours exploring markets and trying local food, which was really fascinating.

× Totally, as I enjoyed the scenery when I sit by the window on long trip.

✓ Totally, I enjoy the scenery when I sit by the window on long trips.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses: 'enjoyed' is past while 'sit' is present. The context of preference is habitual, so use present simple 'enjoy' and 'sit'. Also add plural 'long trips' for naturalness. Suggestion: keep consistent present simple for habits: 'I enjoy the scenery when I sit by the window on long trips.'

× Yes I did. My family had gone to many place and those places are really fascinating.

✓ Yes, I did. My family went to many places and those places were really fascinating.

'Place' should be plural 'places' to match 'many'. 'Had gone' is past perfect which is unnecessary here; simple past 'went' is appropriate for a past experience. Also maintain past tense for description: 'those places were really fascinating.' Suggestion: use simple past for finished past events and plural nouns with 'many'.