旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然并注意句子結構與時態，避免重複與語法錯誤。可先用一個主句直接回答（例如“Yes, I prefer to sit by the window.”），然後用一到兩句提供具體原因並用連接詞銜接（例如 because / so / which）。注意發音上把重要單詞（window, countryside, photos）說清楚。

範例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, I often take photos of the countryside as we travel, which I find very beautiful.

建議: 回答需更有條理且語法正確。先用一個完整主句直接回答（例如“Yes, I did.”），接著用一到兩句具體描述（誰、去哪裡、如何旅行、感受），並使用連接詞（such as, because, so）來銜接。避免不完整句與重複詞語，注意時態一致（過去式）。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents and I often drove for several hours to visit my grandparents in their hometown. Those trips were long but enjoyable because we played games in the car and admired the changing landscapes.

× Well yes I sit by the window I like look at the well and I can take photos of the countryside it's very beautiful

✓ Well, yes. I sit by the window. I like looking at the view and I can take photos of the countryside — it's very beautiful.

句中“You like look” 的动词搭配错误，应使用动名词“like + -ing”结构，表示喜欢做某事，故将“like look”改为“like looking”。另外，“the well” 在这里并不合适，推测说话者想表达风景或景色，应使用“the view”。也修正为更自然的句子分隔与标点。建议：记住常见动词后接动名词（like/love/enjoy）时要用动名词形式，例如“I like reading”。

× Yes, I did. I went along journey with with my parents go to our grandparents' hometown.

✓ Yes, I did. I went on a long journey with my parents to our grandparents' hometown.

原句中“went along journey” 词汇搭配错误，正确为“go on a journey / went on a journey”。并且使用过去时应把后半句保持过去式，“go to” 应改为不定式或直接用过去时的结构，此处改为“to our grandparents' hometown”。删除重复的“with”。建议：学习常见短语搭配，如“go on a trip/journey”。

× We take many house by car.

✓ We took many hours by car.

原句中“take many house” 拼写与词语选择错误，应为“take many hours”（花费很多小时）且句子在叙述过去经历，因此动词需用过去式“took”。“house” 与 “hours” 发音相近但意义不同。建议：注意同音词和常用量词表达，如“hours, days”。

× It's very bold but it's light.

✓ It was very cold but it was fine.

原句“It’s very bold but it's light” 中“bold” 与“light” 用词不当，推测想表达“很冷但很轻松/还好”或“天很亮/不严重”。更合理的表述是“It was very cold but it was fine.” 也要与过去时一致。建议：根据语境选择恰当形容词，并保持时态一致。

× I will

✓ I will (say more) / I will tell you more later.

单独的“I will” 是不完整句子，缺少谓语或宾语，属于句子结构不完整。应补充完整内容，例如“I will tell you more later.” 建议：避免留下不完整句子，表达将要做的具体动作。