旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar and word choice, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct small errors (e.g. “sit by the window,” “it makes me feel more comfortable,” and past habits vs. general preference). Keep the response to no more than four sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy looking at the scenery and it makes me feel more comfortable and private. Also, I can take photos and videos during the trip, and when I want to rest I often lean my head against the window and take a short nap.

建議: Improve grammar and tense consistency, and make the answer clearer and more specific. Begin with a direct topic sentence using past tense for childhood experiences, then add one or two concrete details (where you went, what you did) linked with a connector. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (“we sometimes traveled,” “we enjoyed”).

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family often took long trips during school holidays to visit relatives who lived far away, and we usually traveled by car or train. We enjoyed playing games with my cousins and stopping at interesting places along the way, which made those journeys very memorable.

× I prefer to sit by window because I love watching sceneries and it feels me more comfortable and private.

✓ I prefer to sit by the window because I love watching scenery and it makes me feel more comfortable and private.

The noun 'window' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific window on the vehicle (Grammar Problem Type ID 17). 'Sceneries' is uncountable in this context; use 'scenery' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'It feels me more comfortable' is incorrect word order and verb choice; use 'it makes me feel more comfortable' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 and 26). Suggestions: add 'the' before 'window', replace 'sceneries' with 'scenery', and use the causative structure 'make someone feel' for correct meaning.'

× Plus I can take photos and videos and whenever I want to take a rest, I set my head against the window and take a nap.

✓ Plus I can take photos and videos, and whenever I want to rest, I lay my head against the window and take a nap.

'Take a rest' is not incorrect but 'rest' alone is more natural (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). 'Set my head against the window' is awkward; use 'lay my head' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use commas to join clauses clearly. Suggestion: use 'rest' and 'lay my head' for natural phrasing.'

× Yes, I did when I was a child I have a long journey with my family on school holidays.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had long journeys with my family during school holidays.

This sentence mixes past simple and present simple incorrectly. After 'When I was a child' the action should be in past tense: 'had' not 'have' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Also 'a long journey' should be plural 'long journeys' to match habitual past events (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Use 'during' or 'on' with 'school holidays' — 'during' is more natural here (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestion: use past simple consistently and pluralize for repeated actions.'

× We sometimes we travel to our relatives who lived far away and at that time we enjoy we enjoyed a lot with my family and cousins.

✓ We sometimes traveled to relatives who lived far away, and at that time we enjoyed ourselves a lot with my family and cousins.

This sentence has redundant subjects ('We sometimes we') and mixed tenses ('enjoy' and 'enjoyed') causing structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). For past habitual actions use past simple consistently: 'traveled' and 'enjoyed'. 'Enjoyed a lot with my family and cousins' needs a reflexive or object: 'enjoyed ourselves a lot' is natural. Remove duplicate words. Suggestion: remove redundancy, keep past tense, and use 'enjoyed ourselves' for clarity.'