旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it's slightly wordy and could be more natural. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences, use a linking phrase for clarity, and add a brief specific detail to enrich the response (for example, what kind of landscapes you like). Avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat because I enjoy looking at the scenery during take-off and landing. For instance, I like watching mountain ranges and coastal views as the plane descends, which helps me relax during the flight.

建議: The response is direct and coherent, and you provide a reason which is good. To improve, combine sentences to sound more natural, add a specific brief example or consequence, and use a linking word for flow. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and include a small detail about local experiences if any.

範例: No, I didn’t have long family trips when I was a child because my parents weren't fond of travelling. As a result, I rarely left our city, although we sometimes visited nearby towns for weekend outings.

× I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I want to see the outside of the airplane, I am enjoying watching the landscapes after the airplane takes off.

✓ I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because I want to see outside the airplane; I enjoy watching the landscape after the airplane takes off.

The original sentence mixes simple present and present continuous incorrectly for a habitual preference. 'I am enjoying watching' suggests a temporary action happening now, but the context is a general preference so simple present 'I enjoy' is appropriate. 'the outside of the airplane' is awkward; 'outside the airplane' or 'the view outside the airplane' is more natural. 'landscapes' can be singular 'landscape' as a general view, and the two clauses should be joined with a semicolon or period instead of a comma splice. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and fix the comma splice by using appropriate punctuation.

× I didn't have a long journey with my family as a child.

✓ I didn't have a long journey with my family when I was a child.

The phrase 'as a child' is acceptable but 'when I was a child' is more natural in conversational English. The past tense 'didn't have' is correct; change is stylistic to improve naturalness. No other grammatical tense error here.

× My parents are not fond of travelling, so I don't really have any experience of going out of the country or even going to another province.

✓ My parents were not fond of traveling, so I didn't really have any experience of going abroad or even going to another province when I was young.

The original mixes present tense 'are' and 'don't really have' with the past context 'as a child'. To keep tense consistent with the earlier sentence about childhood, use past tense: 'were' and 'didn't really have'. 'Travelling' spelling changed to 'traveling' to match earlier usage (either is acceptable). 'Going out of the country' is better expressed as 'going abroad'. Add 'when I was young' to clarify timeframe. Ensure tense consistency when describing past situations.