旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答えは簡潔ですが、文法と語彙の誤りが目立ち、詳細が不足しています。まず「new view」は不自然なので「new views」や「scenery」を使いましょう。「I like to see new building breathing」は意味が不明確です。代わりに建物や風景を見る理由（例えば気分転換になる、地理や文化を学べる等）を1〜2文で具体的に説明し、接続語（because, so, for example, also）を適切に使って論理的に繋げてください。発話は最大5文を目安にし、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。例："I prefer the window seat because I enjoy watching the scenery change. For example, I like seeing different buildings and landscapes, which helps me learn about new places."

範例: I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the scenery change. For example, I like seeing different buildings and landscapes, which helps me learn about new places and makes the journey more interesting.

建議: 回答は混乱しており、語彙や文法の誤り（"charged", "abuse"）が意味を損ねています。まず質問には過去の経験を述べるので過去形で明確に答え、いつ行ったか、どのくらいの旅だったか、一緒に何をしたかなど具体的な情報を一つか二つ加えてください。接続詞（for example, because, and）を使って文をつなげ、不要な反復を避けましょう。また意味のない単語は使わないでください。例："Yes, I went to Tokyo with my family when I was a child. It was a long trip because we traveled by train for several hours, and I enjoyed seeing new places."

範例: Yes, I went to Tokyo with my family when I was a child. It was a long trip because we traveled by train for several hours, and I enjoyed seeing the different neighborhoods and famous landmarks.

× I like to see new view.

✓ I like to see new views.

The noun 'view' should be plural when referring to different scenes or sights in general. Use plural 'views' to indicate multiple or varied sights. Suggestion: use 'views' or 'a new view' depending on intent.

× Also I like to see new building breathing.

✓ Also I like to see new buildings.

The phrase 'building breathing' is incorrect: 'breathing' is a verb or present participle and does not make sense here. Likely intent is to refer to new buildings (plural noun). Remove 'breathing' and use the plural noun 'buildings'. If you meant 'buildings that look alive' say 'buildings that seem alive'.

× I went to Tokyo with my family when I was charged.

✓ I went to Tokyo with my family when I was a child.

The word 'charged' is wrong in this context. The correct expression for being young is 'a child'. Use the noun phrase 'when I was a child'.

× I like to traveling.

✓ I like to travel.

After 'like to' the base verb form should be used: 'like to travel'. Alternatively 'I like traveling' (verb+ing) is also correct. Do not combine 'to' with '-ing'.

× This is because I I like to see new abuse and new.

✓ This is because I like to see new places and new things.

The original contains 'abuse' which is inappropriate and likely a wrong word. Also 'new' alone is incomplete. Use plural nouns 'places' and 'things' to convey varied sights. Remove repeated 'I'.