旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: أجب مباشرة وبوضوح على السؤال بدون إعادة صياغته. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية قصيرة (نعم أو لا + سبب وجيز)، ثم أضف جملة أو جملتين كدعم باستخدام وسائل ربط بسيطة (for example, because, so). تجنب الترددات الصوتية مثل "uh" و"um" وتحقق من تركيب الجملة (مثلاً لا تقول "a sit to sit").

範例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy the view and it helps me relax. For example, I like watching landscapes and cities pass by, which makes long journeys more enjoyable.

建議: ابدأ بجملة موضوعية توضح الإجابة (نعم/لا) ثم نظّم التفاصيل بترتيب منطقي واستخدم كلمات ربط مثل "first", "then", "also" أو "for example". حسن دقة المفردات (مثلاً قل "Burj Khalifa" بدلاً من "Tabuj Khalifa") وارجِع الأزمنة لتكون متسقة (الماضي لأن الحدث في الطفولة). قلل التكرار وامنع الترددات الصوتية.

範例: Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child. We travelled to Dubai and visited the Burj Khalifa first, then we went to the Global Village and finally spent time at the beach. The views were amazing, especially the sunset over the sea.

× Do you prefer a sit to sit by the window when, uh, traveling?

✓ Do you prefer to sit by the window when traveling?

The original sentence uses 'a sit', which is incorrect because 'sit' as a noun is not used here; the correct form is the infinitive verb phrase 'to sit'. Also the structure 'Do you prefer to X or Y' is common, but in this context the examiner asked one option, so 'Do you prefer to sit by the window when traveling?' is correct. Suggestion: use the infinitive 'to sit' after 'prefer' when stating a preference for an action, and remove the article 'a'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× When I was a child, we went to Dubai.

✓ When I was a child, we went to Dubai.

This sentence is already correct: the past tense 'went' matches 'When I was a child'. No change needed. Suggestion: keep past tense verbs consistent for past events. Grammar problem type ID:5

× We had so much fun.

✓ We had so much fun.

This sentence is correct; 'had' correctly expresses past tense for a completed experience. Suggestion: maintain past tense for descriptions of past events. Grammar problem type ID:5

× We went to the, we, we visited Tabuj Khalifa and we go to the world's village and uh, we go to the sea and uh, the view was amazing.

✓ We visited the Burj Khalifa, we went to the Global Village, and we went to the sea; the view was amazing.

Multiple verb issues: inconsistent verb forms (went vs go) and repetition. Use past simple consistently for a sequence of past actions: 'visited' and 'went'. Also corrected proper names and removed hesitations. Suggestions: use past simple for completed past actions and keep verbs parallel in a list (visited, went, went). Grammar problem type ID:5

× The sunset was incredible.

✓ The sunset was incredible.

This sentence is correct; 'was' correctly places the description in the past. Suggestion: no change needed. Grammar problem type ID:5