旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct verb agreement and more natural vocabulary: 'helps me relax' rather than 'help me relax', and replace 'it's so funny' with a clearer description like 'I enjoy the view' or 'I find it entertaining'. Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences) and add a brief reason with a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

範例: Yes, I usually prefer the window seat because it helps me relax and I enjoy watching the scenery pass by.

建議: Correct past-tense grammar and avoid hesitations. Use simple past forms ('I didn't have'), proper subject-verb agreement ('my family was'), and remove filler sounds ('uh'). Provide one brief reason and, if possible, a short effect or feeling using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: No, I didn't have long journeys with my family when I was a child because my family was quite poor, so we rarely travelled for leisure.

× Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because it help me relax and it's so funny.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when traveling because it helps me relax and it's so fun.

The verb 'help' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it' so use 'helps' (third person singular -s). Also 'funny' describes something that causes laughter; 'fun' is the correct adjective to describe an enjoyable experience. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement rules (add -s for he/she/it) and choose 'fun' rather than 'funny' when describing an enjoyable activity. Grammar problem type ID:2

× To be honest, I don't have a long journey with my family as a child because when I were a child, my families, uh, is very poor.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have long journeys with my family when I was a child because my family was very poor.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'as a child' and 'when I were a child' require past tense — use 'was' not 'were' for the singular subject 'I'. 'Don't have' (present) is inconsistent with 'as a child' (past); use past 'didn't have'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' to match meaning; the verb 'is' should be past 'was' to match past context. Also 'a long journey' (singular) changed to 'long journeys' to match general experience, but 'a long journey' could be used if referring to one trip. Suggestion: keep past tense for childhood descriptions and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun number. Grammar problem type ID:6