旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接且句子更简洁，避免重复和语法错误。可以先给出主句回答，然后用一到两句具体说明为何这样做（原因和效果），使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。注意单复数和时态（e.g. car sickness, scenery/sceneries, travel/travelling），并控制在最多五句内。

範例: Yes. I usually look out of the car window because I suffer from car sickness. Watching the passing scenery helps me relax and distracts me from feeling unwell. For example, looking at trees and buildings calms me down during long journeys.

建議: 回答要更清楚且避免模糊表述（如“maybe a little”或不完整的句子）。直接回答是否拍照，再说明原因和例子。修正词汇搭配错误（take photos of scenery, remember → memorable, this series → these scenes），并用连词连接观点。

範例: I sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the window because I want to remember especially beautiful views. However, I don't take many pictures since I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than focus on my phone.

建議: 回答要先明确偏好（mountains），避免用词错误（pay for → prefer, sanity smells → salty smell, a bit afraid → slightly afraid）。给出具体原因并用连接词扩展，例如比较安全性、气味、活动喜好。保持语句自然、简洁并控制句数。

範例: I prefer the mountains because I dislike the salty smell of the sea and I'm a little afraid of deep water. I enjoy climbing hills since reaching the summit offers peaceful views and a sense of achievement.

× Yeah, and I can look out the window at the scenery while I'm traveling by car because I have a car sickness.

✓ Yeah, and I can look out the window at the scenery while I'm traveling by car because I get car sick.

句中“have a car sickness”是错误搭配。英语中常用动词短语是“get car sick”或形容词“be car sick”。建议使用“get car sick”表示“晕车”。另外将“car sickness”简化为固定表达可以更地道。

× So I will feel uncomfortable when travelling by cars and I think look at the sceneries can relax me and disturb me.

✓ So I feel uncomfortable when travelling by car, and I think looking at the scenery can both relax and disturb me.

“cars”在此处应使用单数“car”作为搭乘交通工具的泛指用法；“sceneries”不可数，通常用“scenery”。动名词“looking”用于作为主语更自然。中文建议：将“cars”改为单数泛指，scenery不可数，使用动名词作主语。

× So it's a good ways to relax when I traveling by car.

✓ So it's a good way to relax when I'm travelling by car.

“ways”与不定冠词“a”不搭配，应使用单数“way”。另外缺少主语和助动词，应为“I'm travelling”或“I travel”。中文建议：将“a good ways”改为“a good way”，并使用正确的进行时态结构。

× Maybe a little I will take some photos of the scenery because I think some beautiful sceneries need to remember and this series can relax me.

✓ Maybe a little — I will take some photos of the scenery because I think some beautiful views are worth remembering and they can relax me.

“Maybe a little”表达不自然，可用“Maybe a little”改为更清晰的插入语或直接省略；“sceneries”应为不可数或用“views”；“need to remember”也不自然，常说“are worth remembering”。中文建议：用“views”或“scenery”，并用“are worth remembering”表达“值得记住”。

× But I don't take a lot of photos because I think this can make me don't.

✓ But I don't take a lot of photos because I think it would bother me.

原句“this can make me don't”语法混乱，不能用“don't”作为动词补语。应明确主语“it”并用合适动词短语，如“bother me”表示打扰。中文建议：把“this”替换为“it”，并用“bother me”或“feel uncomfortable”。

× I pay for the mountains because I don't like the sanity smells in the seas and I have a bit afraid of the deep waters.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I don't like the salty smell of the sea and I'm a little afraid of deep water.

“pay for the mountains”错误，应为“prefer the mountains”。“sanity smells”是错误词汇，应为“salty smell”；“seas”可用“the sea”或“the ocean”；“I have a bit afraid of”结构错误，正确为“I'm a little afraid of”。中文建议：使用固定搭配“prefer”，把“salty smell”和“a little afraid of”替换原错误表达。

× But I love climbing the mountains because I think when I'm at the top of the mountains the beautiful views can relax me and make me feel peaceful.

✓ But I love climbing mountains because I think when I'm at the top of a mountain the beautiful views can relax me and make me feel peaceful.

“climbing the mountains”在泛指活动时通常说“climbing mountains”。“at the top of the mountains”若指任一座山应为“at the top of a mountain”；若指特定群山则保留定冠词。中文建议：根据语境使用泛指形式“climbing mountains”或明确一座山时用“a mountain”。