旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, correct grammar, shorten and organize into 2–3 sentences, and use linking words. Focus: avoid contradictions and verb form errors (e.g., 'I usually' not 'I like to listening'). Add one brief reason or habit detail.

範例: Not really. I usually listen to music when I travel by bus or car, so I don’t often look out the window. Sometimes, though, I glance outside if the view is interesting.

建議: Answer directly and avoid contradictory statements. Use correct verb forms and clearer logic: say whether you take photos and why, with one supporting detail. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a reason.

範例: Mostly no. I rarely take photos from a moving bus because the windows are dirty and the scenery passes too quickly, so I prefer to listen to music instead.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give a concise, specific reason using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid wordiness and mistakes with articles and verb tense. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer the sea. I’m allergic to pollen, so I sneeze a lot in the mountains when flowers are in bloom; at the seaside I feel much more comfortable.

× Unfortunately I look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car because mostly I like to listening music and when I take a bus it's was formed to look at the window and listening music.

✓ Unfortunately I look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car, but mostly I like listening to music, and when I take a bus I tend to look out the window and listen to music.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and tense usage. 'like to listening music' mixes infinitive and -ing; correct is 'like listening to music' or 'like to listen to music' (Verb + -ing issue, ID 8). 'it's was formed' is ungrammatical and likely intended meaning is 'I tend to' or 'it is customary', so replace with 'I tend to' (sentence structure issue, ID 26). 'listening music' lacks the preposition 'to' after 'listening' (preposition issue, ID 11). Suggestions: use consistent verb forms (either gerund or infinitive), include necessary prepositions after verbs (listen to), and use clear verbs to express habitual actions (tend to, usually).

× Mostly not. For example, when I take a bus, I sit and listening my favorite musics, look at through the window and take photos. Is not my job.

✓ Not usually. For example, when I take a bus, I sit and listen to my favorite music, look through the window, and take photos. It is not my job.

Errors: 'sit and listening' mixes base form and -ing; after 'sit and' coordinate verbs should be parallel: 'sit and listen' (Verb + -ing issue, ID 8 and sentence structure, ID 26). 'listening my favorite musics' needs 'listen to' and 'music' is uncountable so not plural (singular/plural and preposition issues, IDs 1 and 11). 'look at through the window' has incorrect preposition order; correct is 'look through the window' (preposition issue, ID 11). 'Is not my job' is missing subject; correct 'It is not my job' (sentence without a verb/subject-verb structure, ID 23 and 26). Suggestions: keep parallel verb forms, use 'listen to' and treat 'music' as uncountable, fix prepositions and include subjects in sentences.

× I prefer sea because of I'm allergic to pollens and when I take a mountain trip there was a many of pollens because of flowers and it burns my nose because of I'm starting to sneeze.

✓ I prefer the sea because I am allergic to pollen, and when I take a trip to the mountains there are many pollens from the flowers and it irritates my nose, causing me to start sneezing.

Errors: missing definite article before 'sea' (Article error, ID 22). 'because of I'm allergic' is incorrect connector; use 'because I am allergic' (sentence structure, ID 26). 'pollens' — 'pollen' is usually uncountable (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'there was a many of pollens' mixes tense and quantifier; should be 'there are many pollens' or better 'there is a lot of pollen' (plural/quantifier and tense issues, IDs 1 and 6). 'mountain trip' better as 'trip to the mountains' (preposition/article issue, IDs 11 and 22). 'it burns my nose' is unnatural; use 'it irritates my nose' or 'causes my nose to burn' and 'because of I'm starting to sneeze' should be 'causing me to start sneezing' (verb form/connector issues, IDs 8 and 26). Suggestions: use definite articles with geographic features ('the sea'), treat 'pollen' as uncountable, match tense and number, and use clear causal connectors like 'causing' or 'which causes'.