旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy photographing landscapes. For example, living in a rural area surrounded by large mountains gives me plenty of opportunities to capture scenic views.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and one specific example; fix grammar and use linking words (for example, especially). Avoid repeating the same idea and keep sentence count under five.

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the car because photography is my hobby. For example, I especially enjoy capturing mountains and lakes, as their light and textures change dramatically during travel.

建議: Answer directly (I prefer the mountains) and give two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repeating phrases.

範例: I prefer the mountains because the air is fresher and the scenery is more peaceful. Also, hiking to higher viewpoints helps me relax and feel refreshed after a busy week.

× Of course I like it because one of the my hobby is taking pictures of beautiful views and nature.

✓ Of course I like it because one of my hobbies is taking pictures of beautiful views and nature.

Error type 22: 'the' is incorrectly used before 'my' and 'hobby' should be plural when preceded by 'one of'. Remove 'the' and change 'hobby' to 'hobbies' to match 'one of'. Suggestion: use 'one of my hobbies' for correct article and number agreement.

× I enjoy this because I'm living in rural area where big mountains.

✓ I enjoy it because I live in a rural area with big mountains nearby.

Error type 26 and 22: 'I'm living' (present continuous) is awkward for a general fact; use simple present 'I live'. 'rural area' needs the indefinite article 'a'. The clause 'where big mountains' is incomplete; include a verb or use 'with' and add 'nearby' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual states and include appropriate articles and prepositions.

× Of course I do it because it's part of my hobby. I like to taking pictures of awesome views.

✓ Of course I do because it's part of my hobby. I like taking pictures of awesome views.

Error type 8: 'like to taking' wrongly mixes infinitive + gerund. Use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. Also 'do it' is unnecessary after 'I do'; 'do' alone is fine. Suggestion: choose one correct verb form (infinitive or -ing) and omit redundant 'it'.

× Most of all, I enjoy taking pictures of mountains, lakes and another beautiful nature areas.

✓ Most of all, I enjoy taking pictures of mountains, lakes and other beautiful natural areas.

Error type 14 and 13: 'another' is incorrect when listing multiple items; use 'other'. 'nature areas' is an incorrect adjective+noun order; 'natural areas' is correct. Suggestion: use 'other' for plural items and use the adjective 'natural' to modify 'areas'.

× In my opinion, I think that I enjoy being in mountains because I like to be in high mountains because there are fresh air and you can refresh yourself.

✓ I enjoy being in the mountains because I like high elevations; the air is fresh there and you can refresh yourself.

Error type 11 and 1 and 13: 'in mountains' needs the definite article 'the' for a general noun phrase. 'be in high mountains' is repetitive and awkward; 'high elevations' or 'high mountains' is better. 'there are fresh air' is wrong: 'air' is uncountable so use 'the air is fresh' (singular) not 'there are'. Suggestion: use 'the mountains' and correct agreement with uncountable nouns ('the air is fresh').