旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more grammatical, concise and directly linked to the question. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and prepositions, avoid repetition (e.g. “watch out the windows” → “look out of the window”).

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or train. I find watching the changing scenery very relaxing, and it helps me relieve stress after a busy day. For example, I enjoy seeing small villages and farmland pass by because they remind me of home.

建議: Answer directly and give a specific reason and a short example. Use correct modal/tenses and clearer vocabulary (e.g. “help me remember the moment” not “remember the memories”). Use a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘so’ once to connect reason and result.

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the window because they help me remember the moment and the feelings I had. For instance, I once photographed a sunset over the hills and later used the picture to show my friends how beautiful the view was.

建議: Give a clear direct answer, correct pronunciation/spelling errors in speaking, and expand with one concrete reason using linking words. Replace vague phrases like “watching sea changing” with more natural expressions such as “watching the sea” or “the waves.”

範例: I prefer the sea because watching the waves and the horizon calms me down. For example, sitting on the beach and listening to the waves helps me feel peaceful after a stressful week.

× Yes, I love to watch out the windows to close the scenery changing when I on a bus or train.

✓ Yes, I love to look out of the windows to watch the scenery change when I am on a bus or train.

Multiple preposition and verb choices are incorrect. Use 'look out of' or 'look out the window' to indicate looking through a window. 'Watch the scenery change' is the correct verb phrase (not 'watch out the windows to close the scenery changing'). Also supply the missing auxiliary and subject: 'I am' instead of 'I on'. Suggestion: simplify to 'look out of the windows' and use base verb + infinitive or object + bare infinitive for perception verbs: 'watch the scenery change.'

× It made me feel relaxing and also can release my stress.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and also helps release my stress.

Wrong verb tense and incorrect word form. 'Relaxing' is an adjective meaning 'causing relaxation' while 'relaxed' describes the speaker's state. The sentence needs present simple 'makes' to match habit, and 'helps release' is natural collocation instead of 'can release' here. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel relaxed' and 'helps release my stress.'

× Yes, I always love to do that because I think it could help me remember the memories and feelings on that moment, so it's very fascinating too.

✓ Yes, I always love doing that because I think it can help me remember the memories and feelings from that moment, so it's very fascinating too.

'Love to do' is acceptable but 'love doing' is more natural for habitual actions; the instruction limits to listed types—here verb form '-ing' correction applied. 'Could' suggests possibility in past/conditional; use 'can' for general ability. Preposition 'on that moment' is incorrect; use 'from that moment.' Suggestion: use 'love doing' or 'I always like to do that,' 'can help me remember,' and 'from that moment.'

× I pre prefer the sea mainly because watching sea changing can help me feel very comfortable and peace.

✓ I prefer the sea mainly because watching the sea change helps me feel very comfortable and peaceful.

Several errors: duplicate 'pre prefer' — remove the extra 'pre.' 'Watching sea changing' is ungrammatical; use 'watching the sea change' (perception verb + bare infinitive). 'Helps' instead of 'can help' fits habitual preference. 'Peace' is a noun; use adjective 'peaceful' to describe a feeling. Suggestion: say 'I prefer the sea' and 'watching the sea change helps me feel comfortable and peaceful.'