旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。开头给出主题句，然后用一两句具体说明为什么喜欢看窗外风景，并用连接词使句子连贯。注意动词时态和词形（例如：see → seeing, like look → like looking）。不要超过五句。

範例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscape. For example, I like seeing fields, small villages and trees passing by, which helps me relax. Also, observing people and houses gives me a sense of the local life.

建議: 回答需要更简洁并使用正确的动词形式和连词。先直接回答（Yes/No），然后给出具体原因或例子，使用连词（for example, because, so）来组织信息。避免碎片化句子和不完整短语。

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy capturing interesting views. For example, I usually photograph coastlines, mountains and old buildings to remember the trip. I also share some pictures with friends after the journey.

建議: 答案需要更清楚地表达比较理由并修正语法和用词。先给出明确偏好（I prefer the sea），接着用一两句说明原因，使用恰当的连接词（because, so）并提供具体细节。避免重复和拼写错误。

範例: I prefer the sea because I grew up in a mountain town and rarely had the chance to visit the coast. So I enjoy the fresh air, wide views and relaxing atmosphere of the seaside when I travel.

× Yes I do, I love see the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I do. I love seeing the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car.

该句中动词 love 后应接动名词（-ing 形式）来表示喜欢做某事，而不是不带 to 的动词原形。建议将 see 改为 seeing；另外句子应分成两句并加上逗号和句点以更符合书面表达。

× I like look this and it is enjoy the traveling.

✓ I like looking at it, and it makes traveling enjoyable.

动词 like 后也要接动名词（looking）。另外 look 后需加介词 at 表示“看着……”。原句的 it is enjoy the traveling 结构不正确，应改为 it makes traveling enjoyable 或 I enjoy the travel（使用 enjoy + 名词）。解释和建议：使用 looking at；用 makes ... enjoyable 或者直接用 enjoy。

× Oh sure, I love take photos wherever people or sceneries and I more prefer like take photo of sceneries because I like. Admire View.

✓ Oh sure, I love taking photos of people or scenery wherever I go, and I prefer taking photos of landscapes because I like admiring the view.

love 和 prefer 后应接动名词 taking。sceneries 用法不当，英语中通常用 scenery 或 landscape（不可数或用 landscapes）。wherever 的位置需调整以保持句子流畅。最后的 Admire View 应改为 admiring the view（动名词短语）并与前句连成完整句。建议使用 taking photos、scenery/landscapes、admiring the view。

× Oh sure, I love take photos wherever people or sceneries and I more prefer like take photo of sceneries because I like. Admire View.

✓ Oh sure, I love taking photos of people or scenery wherever I go, and I prefer taking photos of landscapes because I like admiring the view.

原句中缺少介词 of（take photos of），以及 wherever 后缺少动词短语来说明地点（wherever I go）。建议在 take photos 后加 of，并用 wherever I go 表达“无论去哪里”。

× I prefer the sea because my hometown is in the mountain and see I didn't see or I near never late to see so I wanted to go.

✓ I prefer the sea because my hometown is in the mountains and I hardly ever get to see the sea, so I want to go there.

句子中有时态和词序混乱：hometown is in the mountain 应为 in the mountains（复数常用），表达几乎看不到用 hardly ever get to see，更符合现在情况应使用现在时 I want to go（而不是过去时 wanted）。near never late to see 是错误搭配，应改为 hardly ever get to see 或 rarely see。建议使用复数 mountains，使用 hardly ever 或 rarely 表示“几乎不”，并用现在时表示愿望。

× I prefer the sea because my hometown is in the mountain and see I didn't see or I near never late to see so I wanted to go.

✓ I prefer the sea because my hometown is in the mountains and I hardly ever get to see the sea, so I want to go there.

mountain 在此处应使用复数形式 mountains 来表示山区或山里。sceneries 在前句也应使用 scenery（不可数）或 landscapes（可数复数）。建议注意可数和不可数名词的区别，使用 mountains 表示“在山里”。