建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on clarity, correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Use correct words (e.g., "tall buildings", "near my home", "city", "tower") and simple linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep answers concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city. For example, there is a distinctive rotating tower and several modern apartment blocks close to my street.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one specific reason or example. Use correct nouns ("buildings", "photos") and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy urban scenery. For example, when I have free time I walk around the city center to photograph modern facades and busy streets.

建議: Answer directly naming a place or building, then give a specific reason. Use correct grammar for verbs and nouns ("visit Austria", "well known for its architecture", "take photos"). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences and include one concrete detail or example.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit Austria because it is famous for its historic architecture. I especially want to see and photograph buildings in Vienna, such as the Schönbrunn Palace, because their details look beautiful in photos.

建議: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) and then a concise reason with specific supporting detail. Use correct phrases ("prefer to live in a tall building" or "prefer a small house") and avoid conflicting statements. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "however."

範例: No, I prefer to live in a small house rather than a tall building because I enjoy having access to a garden and natural scenery. Living in a house would make me feel calmer and happier.

× Of course there are many tool be tool beating in my house in near nearby my house because in my country is very big city so there are many toll beating especially rotate tower is very torbulating.

✓ Of course, there are many tall buildings near my house because my country has very large cities, so there are many tall buildings, especially rotating towers which are very breathtaking.

The student used incorrect words ('tool','beating','toll','rotate','torbulating') instead of the adjectives/nouns needed. Replace with 'tall buildings', 'near my house', 'very large cities', 'rotating towers', and 'breathtaking' to convey meaning. Also adjust word order and articles for natural English. Suggestion: learn correct adjective forms and common collocations (e.g. 'tall building', 'near my house', 'very big city' -> plural 'cities' when speaking generally).

× Of course, I usually take a photo of beating, because I like taking a picture, especially a modern city, that modern city scenery, so I have some free time.

✓ Of course, I usually take photos of buildings because I like taking pictures, especially of modern city scenery, so when I have some free time I usually go out to take pictures of modern city life.

Errors include incorrect article and noun forms ('a photo of beating' -> 'photos of buildings'), and awkward phrasing ('that modern city scenery'). Use plural nouns for habitual actions ('photos','pictures') and include preposition 'of' for 'scenery'. Also connect clauses properly. Suggestion: use plural for general habits and 'of' after 'pictures' when specifying subject.

× I usually go to take a picture for modern city life, so modern city life contain a beating.

✓ I usually go to take pictures of modern city life, so modern city life contains many interesting buildings.

Use 'take pictures of' not 'take a picture for'. Also subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'modern city life contains' (singular subject) and 'interesting buildings' replace 'contain a beating'. Suggestion: practice common verb-preposition combinations (take pictures of) and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

× Of course I'd like visit to Austria.

✓ Of course I'd like to visit Austria.

After 'would like' the correct structure is 'would like to + base verb', not 'would like visit' or 'visit to'. Remove extra 'to'. Suggestion: memorize 'would like to + verb' pattern.

× Austria is very phone well known for their architect architecture, so there are many beautiful building.

✓ Austria is very well known for its architecture, so there are many beautiful buildings.

Incorrect words 'phone', 'architect' used redundantly and wrong possessive 'their' for a country; use 'its'. Also pluralize 'buildings'. Suggestion: use 'well known for its architecture' and ensure noun-adjective agreement.

× I want to taking a picture Austria's painting.

✓ I want to take pictures of Austria's buildings/landscapes.

Use 'want to + base verb' ('want to take'), not 'want to taking'. Also clarify object: 'Austria's paintings' is unclear; likely 'buildings/landscapes'. Suggestion: use 'want to take photos of ...' and choose correct noun.

× It is a in I very impression.

✓ It made a very strong impression on me.

Original sentence is ungrammatical. Use 'It made a very strong impression on me' to express being impressed. Suggestion: learn common expressions like 'made an impression on me' and correct article use ('a' vs 'an').

× To be honest, I prefer to live in tall building because I like a natural scenery, so I'd like to live a little bit.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to live in a tall building because I like natural scenery, so I'd like to live in a small house.

Missing articles: 'a tall building' and 'a small house'. 'Natural scenery' doesn't take 'a'. 'I'd like to live a little bit' is unclear; replace with 'in a small house'. Suggestion: ensure correct article use and clearer phrasing for preferences.

× Little house. I think that it is make me feel happy and calm both forbidding is.

✓ A small house. I think that it makes me feel happy and calm.

Use 'a small house' rather than 'Little house'. Verb form should be 'it makes' (subject-verb agreement). Remove 'both forbidding is' which is meaningless. Suggestion: ensure complete sentences and correct subject-verb agreement; keep sentences concise.