建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct plural and article errors (e.g., “buildings,” “are,” “only residential buildings”). Use a linking word if adding a second detail.

範例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most buildings are two- or three-storey residential houses, so there are no business complexes nearby.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity: use present simple consistently and correct noun forms. Give one specific reason and an example. Use a linking phrase like “for example” or “because”.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. If a building has an interesting design or historical value, I photograph it because these images are useful for my work as an architect, for example when I study traditional facades.

建議: Make your answer specific and grammatical. Name or describe the building, state one reason why you want to visit, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases like “in the command.”

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the old town hall near the river. It has important historical value and reflects the local culture, so I often visit it in my free time to study its architecture.

建議: Be concise and correct repetition/errors. Give one clear reason with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”) and a specific detail about the difficulty. Avoid filler words like “uh.”

範例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I live with my elderly parents and a small daughter, and stairs or long lifts would be inconvenient for them. Therefore, we prefer a low-rise house.

× We have similar building with two and three stories and it's all only residential building, not business complexes.

✓ We have similar buildings with two or three stories and they are all residential buildings, not business complexes.

The nouns 'building' and 'residential building' should be plural to agree with 'We have' and the description of multiple items. Also 'and it's all only' is awkward; use 'they are all' to refer to multiple buildings and place 'only' before 'residential' if intended. Suggestion: make subjects and nouns agree in number and use a clear pronoun ('they') for plural reference.

× When I go outside, if I feel that the building had different design and have a architectural and historical value, then I take picture because it is good for me in a professional field.

✓ When I go outside, if I feel that a building has a different design and has architectural and historical value, then I take a picture because it is useful for me professionally.

The sentence mixes past ('had') with present context and uses incorrect verb agreement ('have' with singular 'building'). For general habits use present simple: 'a building has' and 'has architectural and historical value'. Also use 'a picture' (article) and 'useful for me professionally' instead of 'good for me in a professional field'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present simple) and match verbs to singular subject.

× When I go outside, if I feel that the building had different design and have a architectural and historical value, then I take picture because it is good for me in a professional field.

✓ When I go outside, if I feel that a building has a different design and has architectural and historical value, then I take a picture because it is useful for me professionally.

Missing and incorrect articles: 'the building' implies a specific building but context is any building, so use 'a building'. 'Different design' needs 'a different design'. 'Have a architectural' should be 'has architectural' or 'has an architectural'. Also 'take picture' needs 'take a picture'. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular count nouns and 'an' before vowel sounds; ensure articles match intended specificity.

× When I go outside, if I feel that the building had different design and have a architectural and historical value, then I take picture because it is good for me in a professional field.

✓ When I go outside, if I feel that a building has a different design and has architectural and historical value, then I take a picture because it is useful for me professionally.

Use present perfect/present simple rather than past participle 'had' for habitual actions. The past participle 'had' incorrectly places the action in the past; for repeated or general actions, use present simple 'has'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and general truths.

× Yes, there is in the command. There are different historical value and which reflect the cultural identity of local community.

✓ Yes, there is one in the compound. It has historical value and reflects the cultural identity of the local community.

The original uses plural/singular inconsistently: 'There are different historical value' mixes plural verb with singular noun. Also 'which reflect' is incorrect relative clause for singular subject. 'In the command' likely meant 'in the compound' or similar; corrected to 'in the compound'. Ensure noun-verb agreement: singular subject with singular verb and 'value' treated as uncountable here as 'historical value'. Suggestion: rephrase to match number and use correct relative clause.

× I frequently go there and study about the building in my leisure time.

✓ I frequently go there and study the building in my leisure time.

The verb 'study' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed directly by an object; 'study about' is nonstandard. Use 'study the building' or 'study information about the building'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary preposition or rephrase to 'study information about' if intended.

× No, I don't. I don't want to live in a tall building because I live with my family members so it would be difficult to to my parents and uh also difficult for my small daughter.

✓ No, I don't. I don't want to live in a tall building because I live with my family, so it would be difficult for my parents and also difficult for my young daughter.

Pronoun and phrase issues: 'difficult to to my parents' is incorrect; 'difficult for my parents' is correct. 'Family members' can be simplified to 'family'. 'Small daughter' is unnatural; use 'young daughter' or 'little daughter'. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'for' to indicate who experiences difficulty and choose natural adjective for age.

× So I want to stay in the small low rise buildings.

✓ So I want to stay in small low-rise buildings.

Article and plurality: 'the small low rise buildings' is awkward; if speaking generally, omit 'the' and hyphenate 'low-rise'. Ensure plural 'buildings' matches general statement. Suggestion: use 'small low-rise buildings' for natural phrasing.