建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your reply grammatically correct, direct, and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct pluralization and number expressions, and avoid repeating words.

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. The tallest one is about 27 floors high and houses offices and shops on the lower levels.

建議: Answer directly and expand briefly with a reason using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and make the reason clear and natural. Use simple linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct article use.

範例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I prefer to look at them directly and appreciate the details. However, I sometimes take pictures if a building has unusual architecture or during travel.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason or detail. Correct grammar for singular/plural and time expressions. Use linking words like 'but' or 'because' properly and say distances or travel time naturally.

範例: Yes, there is a building I would like to visit: Taipei 101. It is about an hour from my home, but I want to go because of its observation deck and impressive design.

建議: Respond directly, give a clear reason, and correct grammar and word choice. Avoid confusing expressions like 'run away faster from the earthquake.' Explain the concern clearly and briefly, using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan experiences frequent earthquakes, and I worry about the safety and evacuation difficulties during a quake.

× Is there tall buildings near my home?

✓ Are there tall buildings near my home?

This sentence uses the existential 'there is/there are' construction. Use 'there is' with singular nouns and 'there are' with plural nouns. 'Buildings' is plural, so the correct form is 'Are there'. Suggestion: Identify whether the noun after 'there' is singular or plural and choose 'is' or 'are' accordingly.

× And the tallest building near my home is about 27 high 27 floors.

✓ The tallest building near my home is about 27 stories high.

The sentence has awkward word order and missing article usage. 'The tallest building' is correct, but '27 high 27 floors' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use '27 stories high' or '27 floors' and place 'high' after the measure. Also the leading conjunction 'And' is unnecessary at the start of a standalone answer. Suggestion: Use a single clear measure phrase like '27 stories high' or 'has 27 floors' and place modifiers in the normal order.

× No, I don't take photos of the buildings because I think using my eyes can see more clearly.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I think I can see more clearly with my eyes.

The phrase 'using my eyes can see more clearly' is ungrammatical because 'using my eyes' is a participial phrase that cannot be the subject of 'can see'. It's clearer to say 'I can see more clearly with my eyes.' Also 'the buildings' is unnecessary generalization; 'buildings' without the article is more natural here. Suggestion: Make sure the subject and verb agree and place adverbial phrases ('with my eyes') after the verb phrase.

× Yes, there are building that I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.

The original mixes plural verb 'are' with singular noun 'building' and omits the article. For a single building use 'There is a building'. If speaking about multiple buildings, use 'There are buildings'. Suggestion: Match 'there is/are' to the noun number and include the appropriate article for singular countable nouns.

× I prefer to visit the Taipei 101, but the building is one hour times far from my home.

✓ I would like to visit Taipei 101, but it is about one hour away from my home.

Use 'visit Taipei 101' without 'the' (proper names of buildings often omit 'the'). 'One hour times far' is incorrect; say 'about one hour away' or 'one hour from my home.' Also use 'I would like to' or 'I prefer' depending on nuance. 'The building' is awkward—use 'it' to refer back to Taipei 101. Suggestion: Use natural prepositional phrase 'one hour away/from' and omit unnecessary articles with proper names.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan is the place that have many earthquakes, so I think living in the the building can run away faster from the earthquake.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because Taiwan is a place that has many earthquakes, so I think it would be easier to evacuate from a low-rise building during an earthquake.

Several issues: 'the place that have' has subject-verb agreement error—use 'has' for singular 'place'. 'The the' is a repeated article. 'Living in the building can run away faster' is ungrammatical: people, not buildings, run away; also 'can' is not the best modal here. Use 'it would be easier to evacuate' to express hypothetical/situational ability. Use 'low-rise building' or 'a lower building' for contrast. Suggestion: Fix subject-verb agreement, remove duplicate article, and use an appropriate modal or conditional ('would be') and verb ('evacuate' or 'leave') to express the intended meaning.