建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific details with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid filler words and repetition, and keep within 3–4 sentences. For example, say whether there are tall buildings, describe typical house heights, and mention any exceptions.

範例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. My hometown is quite rural, so most houses are one or two storeys high. Occasionally you can see a three-storey house, but nothing like high-rise buildings in a city.

建議: Give a clear direct answer, then provide a short reason and one specific example. Use correct negatives (don’t vs don’t not) and correct tense. Keep sentences simple and coherent, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer taking pictures of my family and friends. For example, I often photograph my relatives at weddings to keep the memories.

建議: Answer directly, then give accurate factual detail and a clear reason. Avoid guessing numbers; use approximate but plausible facts. Use linking words (because, for example) and finish your sentence. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. I am interested in its observation deck and the restaurants at the top, which offer great views of the city.

建議: Give a clear opinion first (Yes/No/Maybe), then give two concrete reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear words like 'suspicious' and incomplete sentences. Use correct pronouns and finish thoughts. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I would consider living in a tall building because apartments often have better security and convenient facilities. For example, many high-rises have security staff and nearby shops, which would be useful for my wife and me.

× There is no building near to our home because our hometown is in underdeveloped and the homes are only single Storey or double Storey.

✓ There are no buildings near our home because our hometown is underdeveloped and the houses are only single-storey or double-storey.

Use 'there are' for plural 'buildings' (There be issue). Remove unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'near'. Use 'underdeveloped' without 'in'. Use 'houses' instead of 'homes' for general dwelling units and hyphenate compound adjectives 'single-storey' and 'double-storey'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word choice. Suggestion: Replace singular constructions with plural where appropriate and remove extra prepositions.

× But some homes are looking taller, uh, triple.

✓ But some houses look taller, even three storeys.

The progressive 'are looking' is awkward for a general description; use simple present 'look' (Incorrect adverb placement/verb form). 'Triple' is unclear; use 'three storeys' to specify height. Keep adverbial modifiers close to the verb for clarity. Suggestion: Use simple present for general states and give clear measurements.

× No, I don't not like to take pictures of building because I want to take pictures of my homes and my friends in now special occasion because I want to make them a memorable and good thing, which I realize.

✓ No, I don't like to take pictures of buildings because I prefer to take pictures of my home and my friends on special occasions to create memorable moments.

Double negative 'don't not' is incorrect; use single negative 'don't' (Modal verb usage). Use plural 'buildings' or singular consistently; 'my home' is usually singular. Use 'on special occasions' not 'in now special occasion'. 'Make them a memorable and good thing' is unidiomatic; use 'create memorable moments'. Suggestion: Avoid double negatives, use correct preposition 'on' for occasions, and choose natural collocations like 'create memorable moments'.

× Yes, I want to visit a Burj Khalifa, which is located in uh Dubai, and this is a taller building uh in all the world and its height is almost 22122 floors, I think and the I like most about the building is restaurant, which is.

✓ Yes, I want to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai, which is the tallest building in the world; it has about 122 floors, I think, and what I like most about the building is the restaurant.

Use definite article 'the Burj Khalifa' for a unique landmark (There be/article issue). Say 'tallest' (superlative) not 'taller' (Comparative error). 'In all the world' is awkward; use 'in the world'. Correct the exaggerated floor number to a plausible '122 floors' and place commas appropriately. Use 'what I like most' and include 'the' before 'restaurant'. Suggestion: Use correct articles for named landmarks, use superlative for unique extremes, and check factual numbers.

× I think living in a tall building is a very good decision because they are very suspicious for two person for my and for my and my wife.

✓ I think living in a tall building is a very good decision because they are very suitable for two people, for me and my wife.

'Suspicious' is the wrong adjective; use 'suitable' or 'comfortable' (Incorrect use of adjectives). 'Two person' should be 'two people' (Singular and plural issue). Remove repeated phrases. Ensure pronouns are correct: 'me and my wife' or better 'my wife and me'. Suggestion: Choose adjectives that match meaning, use plural forms for counts, and avoid repetition.

× And there are several benefits to live in apartment because.

✓ There are several benefits to living in an apartment.

Use 'to living' (gerund) after 'benefits to' (Verb + -ing form). Include an article 'an' before 'apartment'. The sentence was incomplete ('because' left hanging). Remove 'because' or complete the clause. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'benefits to' and include articles where required; avoid leaving conjunctions unfinished.