建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子有语法错误与用词不准（如“have lots of”应为“there are a lot of”或“many”）；回答应更直接并使用主题句开头，同时可加一两句具体细节来丰富内容。注意把句子控制在最多五句内，避免冗余。

範例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. In fact, my building is the shortest in the neighborhood, so it feels a bit enclosed by skyscrapers. Because of that, my apartment gets less natural light in the afternoon.

建議: 回答表达情绪过于绝对（“hate”），且有语法和拼写错误（如“if”应为“of”，单复数错误）。应先明确回答，然后用1–2句具体原因并用连词衔接，使表达更礼貌和自然。

範例: No, I don't usually photograph the buildings near my home. I find their exteriors unattractive, and they often block the view of the sunset, so I prefer photographing parks and the skyline from a distance instead.

建議: 语法和数量词错误（如“has one buildings”应为“There is one building”）；句子较长且重复，可先给出直接肯定句，再用两到三句具体说明为什么想去以及期望看到的景象。

範例: Yes, there is one building I'd like to visit: the tallest tower in the province. I want to go to the observation deck to get a panoramic view of the whole city and take some photos of the river and surrounding hills.

建議: 回答有重复词（“when when”）和拼写/用词错误（“fired”应为“fire”）。表达可以更自然，先明确观点，再给出两个具体原因并用恰当的连接词连接。避免冗长或情绪化的表述。

範例: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I worry about safety in events like earthquakes or fires, and I think evacuating from a high floor could be difficult and stressful.

× Yeah, there have lots of tall buildings surrounding my home and my home is the lowest building in this area.

✓ Yes, there are lots of tall buildings surrounding my home, and my house is the lowest building in this area.

句子中使用了 have，但此处应使用存在句型 there are；另外 house 比較常用於表示“家”而不是重複用 home；主語與動詞形式要一致。建議使用“there are”來表示“有很多高楼”。

× Actually I don't take any photos of these buildings because the exterior if this building is too ugly and it prevents me to enjoy the beautiful sunset.

✓ Actually, I don't take any photos of these buildings because the exterior of these buildings is too ugly and it prevents me from enjoying the beautiful sunset.

原句中有拼写错误“if”應為“of”；代词不一致，先用 these buildings（复数），后面却用 this building（单数），应统一为复数；动词搭配应为 prevent somebody from doing something，不能用 prevent me to enjoy。并注意标点和逗号。

× So I hate those building.

✓ So I hate those buildings.

名词单复数错误，those 指代复数名词，后面应使用复数形式 buildings。

× To be honest, there has one buildings that I want to visit that is the tallest building in this province and I really want to go to the top to see the whole landscape on this city.

✓ To be honest, there is one building that I want to visit; it is the tallest building in this province and I really want to go to the top to see the whole landscape of this city.

原句使用 has 不符合 there is/are 的用法，也存在单复数不一致（one buildings 应为 one building）。此外，连接词和句子结构混乱，应分句；介词应为 of this city 而不是 on this city。建议使用 there is 或直接用 is 并保持名词单复数一致。

× Actually, I don't want to live in the tall building because I think it's dangerous when when faced some earthquake or fired and it's difficult for me to escape the building.

✓ Actually, I don't want to live in a tall building because I think it's dangerous when facing an earthquake or a fire, and it's difficult for me to escape the building.

原句中有重复单词“when when”；冠词使用不当，應為 a tall building（泛指）；短語“faced some earthquake or fired”結構錯誤，應使用 facing an earthquake 或 in an earthquake，且 fire 拼寫錯誤（ fired 是過去分詞/動詞）；另外在列举可数名词时要用冠詞 an earthquake、a fire。建議使用動名詞短語 facing 或介詞短語 in an earthquake/in a fire。