建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one specific detail. Use correct verb forms, articles, and pluralization, and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Link ideas with simple connectors (because, and, for example).

範例: Yes. I live in an apartment near several tall buildings because Kaohsiung is a large city. For example, the most famous is the 85-story tower, which I can see from my balcony.

建議: Use consistent verb tenses and clearer phrasing. Begin with a topic sentence (Yes/No + habit), then explain why and give one specific example. Avoid unclear words (membrane) and reduce repetition. Use linking words like because or so.

範例: Yes, I do. I often take photos of tall buildings because they look dramatic against the sky, and I enjoy capturing the view. For example, I sometimes post these photos on my social media.

建議: Answer directly and use correct conditional forms. Say which building you want to visit and give one clear reason with a linked example. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct (I would, when I go, it feels).

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest observation building in my city because it offers amazing panoramic views. When I go there, I think I would feel relaxed and enjoy the different atmosphere from the streets below.

建議: Give a clear preference and support it with one reason and one contrasting condition. Use proper grammar (It depends; I prefer living; because) and avoid fillers (maybe, like). Use linking words (however, but) to show contrast.

範例: It depends. I prefer living in a tall building because the daytime and night views are beautiful. However, when I travel or want a quieter life, I would choose a townhouse in the suburbs.

× Yes, actually I just living in the apartment and nearby my home is high building.

✓ Yes, actually I am just living in an apartment and there is a tall building near my home.

The original sentence misses the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense ('just living' needs 'am just living'). 'Nearby my home is high building' has incorrect word order, article use, and adjective form; use 'there is' for existence and 'a tall building near my home'. Use 'an apartment' for countable noun.

× I think just as I live in the Gulf show, the Kaohsiung is quite a big city, but we have a lot high building.

✓ I think, since I live in the Gulf area, Kaohsiung is quite a big city, and we have a lot of tall buildings.

Preposition and noun choice: 'in the Gulf show' is incorrect; likely 'in the Gulf area' or 'near the gulf'. 'A lot high building' needs 'a lot of' followed by plural noun and 'tall' as adjective: 'a lot of tall buildings'. Also remove unnecessary article before city name and add commas for clarity.

× The most famous building is 85 floor in.

✓ The most famous building is the 85-story building.

Word order and form: '85 floor in' is ungrammatical. Use compound adjective '85-story' or '85-floor' with the definite article 'the' for a specific famous building.

× Yes, I did sometime if I went to some place, I'd like to take the photo and for the membrane and specially for the high building with the sky and you have a beautiful view.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I go to a place, I like to take photos as memories, especially of tall buildings against the sky because they make a beautiful view.

Tense consistency: 'did sometime if I went' mixes past and habitual present. For habitual action use present simple: 'sometimes when I go'. 'Take the photo and for the membrane' is incorrect; use 'take photos as memories'. 'Specially' -> 'especially'. 'High building' -> 'tall buildings'. Adjust plural and wording for clarity.

× I quite enjoy this.

✓ I quite enjoy that.

Pronoun choice: 'this' refers to something nearby in discourse; 'that' is more natural when referring to the action of taking photos mentioned previously. Either is acceptable, but 'that' fits better here.

× Sometime I will post my in my social media.

✓ Sometimes I will post them on my social media.

Preposition and noun errors: 'post my in my social media' is missing the object and uses wrong preposition. Use 'post them on my social media' or 'post them to my social media accounts'. Also 'Sometimes' (plural) and plural 'them' for photos.

× Yes, I did. Why not? If I went to the high building, I can enjoy the amazing view in the most high place.

✓ Yes, I would. Why not? If I go to a tall building, I can enjoy the amazing view from the highest place.

Tense and conditional: 'Yes, I did' is odd for intention; 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes, I have' fits. 'If I went' suggests subjunctive past; use 'If I go' for a real possibility. 'the most high place' should be 'the highest place' or 'from the highest point' (correct superlative form). 'in' should be 'from' for viewing.

× So when I just went to here, I feel like very relaxing and it's totally different mood and different vibe in here, that environment.

✓ So when I just come here, I feel very relaxed; it's a totally different mood and vibe in this environment.

Adjective/adverb and tense: 'went to here' is incorrect; use 'come here' or 'went here'. 'I feel like very relaxing' is wrong: a person feels 'relaxed' (adjective), not 'relaxing'. 'Different mood and different vibe in here' should be 'a totally different mood and vibe in this environment' with correct articles and prepositions.

× Well it's depend if for now I prefer to living in the high building because in the daytime and night time you will have different more better view.

✓ Well, it depends. For now I prefer living in a tall building because during the day and at night you have different and better views.

Subject-verb agreement and modal/verb form: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends'. 'Prefer to living' should be 'prefer living' or 'prefer to live'. 'Different more better' is redundant; use 'different and better' or just 'better'. Use 'during the day and at night' for correct time expressions and plural 'views'.

× But sometimes if I want to travel maybe I will stay in maybe just like townhouse like which mean like I don't want to go to upstate.

✓ But sometimes when I travel, I might stay in a townhouse because I don't want to go upstate.

Preposition and article errors: 'stay in maybe just like townhouse like which mean like' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'stay in a townhouse'. 'Go to upstate' should be 'go upstate' (no 'to'). Simplify phrasing and use 'might' for possibility.