建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で内容も伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤り（"they are many" → "there are many"、"in city center" → "in the city centre"）があり、自然さが損なわれています。より自然に聞かせるため、短く明確なトピック文に続けて具体的な詳細（高さや用途、景観への影響など）を一つ追加してください。また、不要な繰り返しを避け、最大5文以内に収めてください。

範例: Yes, there are many skyscrapers near my home because I live in the city centre. Most of them are office buildings and they make the skyline look very modern. I sometimes enjoy walking there in the evening when the lights are on.

建議: 意図は伝わりますが、語順と語彙の選択に問題があります（"I don't take photo for UMM for buildings" や冗長な発話）。より自然な否定文を使い、理由をはっきり示すために一つか二つの具体例を追加してください。また、発話開始のフィラー（uh）は控えると流暢さが向上します。

範例: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of nature. For example, I like capturing trees and rivers during hikes because they change with the seasons.

建議: 答えが混乱していて、建物や場所が明確ではありません（"Sakura familiar ones" や文末の未完の表現）。まず具体的な建物名や場所を明示し、その理由を一つ示してください。接続詞で文をつなぎ、文を完結させることを心がけましょう。また、不要なフィラーを減らして明瞭に話してください。

範例: Yes, I would love to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona because it is a famous and unique cathedral. I have never been to Spain, so visiting it would be a great cultural experience.

建議: 意図は伝わりますが、文法の誤り（"I living" → "I live"）や冗長な表現（繰り返しの"it's it's"、不要な推測語）があります。まず直接的な主文で答え、その後に簡潔な補足（現在の居住状況と理由）を一文加え、具体的な詳細（階や眺望など）を入れると良いです。

範例: Yes, I do. I live on the 13th floor of an apartment building, so I enjoy the view and the quiet. The height feels safe to me and I like seeing the city from above.

× Yes, they are many skyscrapers near my house because I live in city center.

✓ Yes, there are many skyscrapers near my house because I live in the city center.

The subject 'there' with 'are' is required for plural existence; 'they are many skyscrapers' is incorrect. Use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns and include the definite article 'the' before 'city center.' Suggestion: use 'There are + plural noun' and remember articles with locations ('the city center').

× Uh, no, I don't take photo for UMM for buildings because I prefer taking photo for nature.

✓ Uh, no, I don't take photos of buildings because I prefer taking photos of nature.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Use 'take photos of' not 'take photo for' and use 'of' with 'nature.' Suggestion: use plural for general activities and the preposition 'of' after 'take photos.'

× Yes uh, I like to visit uh Sakura familiar ones uh, because it is very famous as you know, but I've never been to Spain, so I hope I be there in the.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the familiar Sakura ones because they are very famous, but I've never been to Spain, so I hope I can go there one day.

Multiple issues: 'I like to visit' better as 'I would like to visit' for hypothetical desire. 'Sakura familiar ones' is unclear; use 'the familiar Sakura ones' or name the places. 'It is very famous' must agree with plural 'they are very famous.' 'I hope I be there in the.' is ungrammatical; use 'I hope I can go there one day.' Suggestion: match subject and verb number, use modal 'can' for ability/possibility, and finish the time expression ('one day').

× I guess so. I living in the apartment on 13th floor. It's it's approximately, umm, more than 20 meters. I think it is high.

✓ I guess so. I live in an apartment on the 13th floor. It's approximately, umm, more than 20 meters high, I think.

Use simple present 'I live' not 'I living.' Include the article 'an' before 'apartment' and 'the' before '13th floor.' Combine height description: 'more than 20 meters high.' Suggestion: use correct verb form for habitual states, include appropriate articles, and place 'high' after the measurement.