建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn, súc tích hơn và cấu trúc rõ ràng: mở bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vị trí, ví dụ thời gian). Tránh các cụm từ thừa như “honestly”, “quite near”, “in every morning”, và chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ “I am living” → “I live”; “it seemed to be really easy for me to come across” → “I often see”).

範例: Yes. I live near the city centre, so I often see several tall buildings on my way to school in the morning. For example, there is a 30-storey office block just two streets away from my flat.

建議: Nội dung rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ; giọng nói hơi không trang trọng cho IELTS. Nên mở bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng cấu trúc như “No, I don’t usually…” hoặc “Not really…” rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với 1 ví dụ. Tránh từ lóng như “kinda” và sửa lỗi lặp “views of the views”; chú ý động từ và danh từ (I am not interested in taking photos…).

範例: Not really. I’m not very interested in photographing buildings because I find them a bit dull. Instead, I usually take photos of the views from inside buildings and share them on my social media to show friends where I’ve been.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (“Yes, I would like to visit...”), giải thích lý do và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tòa Landmark 81, lý do muốn lên đài quan sát). Tránh lặp lại “kind of boring” và dùng thì phù hợp (“I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City to see Vietnam’s tallest building”).

範例: Yes. I’d like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it’s the tallest building in Vietnam and offers an observation deck with great city views. I hope to go there one day to take photos and see the skyline from above.

建議: Ý rõ và hợp lý, nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và diễn đạt cho tự nhiên, súc tích. Mở bằng câu chủ đề ngắn (“No, I wouldn’t prefer to live in a tall building.”), rồi nêu 2 lý do rành mạch với linking words (“firstly…, secondly…”). Sửa các lỗi như “when it come to” → “when it comes to”, “low rise homes” → “low-rise homes” hoặc “a low-rise home”.

範例: No, I wouldn’t prefer living in a tall building. Firstly, I value being close to nature and fresh air, which is easier in low-rise areas. Secondly, in emergencies like a fire, it’s generally safer and quicker to evacuate from a low-rise home.

× Yes, honestly, because I am living quite near the center of the city, so in every morning it seemed to be really easy for me to come across some tall buildings nearby my house when I am on my way to school.

✓ Yes, honestly, I live quite near the center of the city, so every morning it is really easy for me to come across some tall buildings near my house when I am on my way to school.

The student mixes present continuous ('I am living') with past tense ('it seemed') and an inappropriate time expression ('in every morning'). Use the simple present for habitual actions: 'I live' and 'every morning'. Use 'it is really easy' to describe a current habitual situation. Also use 'near' instead of 'nearby' before 'my house'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use time expressions correctly (e.g., 'every morning').

× I do not have interest in taking photos of the building because I find it kinda boring.

✓ I am not interested in taking photos of buildings because I find it kind of boring.

The phrase 'do not have interest in' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'be interested in'. Also 'the building' is too specific; use plural 'buildings' for general preference. Replace 'kinda' with 'kind of' in formal speech. Suggestion: use correct adjective+preposition collocation 'interested in' and match singular/plural appropriately.

× Instead I prefer taking pictures of views of the views from inside buildings and then post it on social feed to show my friend the place I have visited.

✓ Instead, I prefer taking pictures of the views from inside buildings and then posting them on my social feed to show my friends the places I have visited.

Multiple issues: 'pictures of views of the views' is redundant; use 'the views'. 'post it' should match plural 'pictures' so use gerund 'posting them'. 'social feed' needs a possessive or article; 'my social feed' is natural. 'friend' and 'place' should be plural to match general meaning. Suggestion: ensure number agreement between pronouns and nouns, avoid redundancy, and use correct verb form after 'prefer' for parallelism.

× As I said, I am not really into buildings because it's kind of boring to me, but if you ask me to pick one, I would hope that in the future I will have a chance to visit Landmark, which is located in Ho Chi Minh City, to see the highest building in Vietnam.

✓ As I said, I am not really into buildings because they are kind of boring to me, but if you asked me to pick one, I would hope that in the future I will have a chance to visit Landmark in Ho Chi Minh City to see the tallest building in Vietnam.

Use 'they are' to refer to plural 'buildings'. For a hypothetical question use past tense in the if-clause ('if you asked me') with a conditional in the main clause ('I would hope'). 'Located in' is acceptable but can be shortened. Use 'tallest' as the superlative form when comparing buildings in Vietnam. Suggestion: match pronoun number, use correct conditional structure, and use superlative for highest among many.

× I would not prefer living in tall buildings because I always value being close to nature and fresh air.

✓ I would not prefer to live in tall buildings because I always value being close to nature and fresh air.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive ('to live') or gerund depending on structure; 'prefer living' can be acceptable but sounds less natural here with 'would not prefer'. Use 'to live' for a clearer statement. Suggestion: use correct verb form after 'prefer' for natural phrasing.

× Also when it come to emergencies such as fire, living in a low rise homes is much easier for me to escape from fire.

✓ Also, when it comes to emergencies such as fires, living in low-rise homes makes it much easier for me to escape from a fire.

'it come' should be 'it comes' for subject-verb agreement. 'low rise homes' should be 'low-rise homes' (hyphen) and plural agrees with 'homes'. The verb phrase needs reworking: use 'makes it much easier' or 'it is much easier for me to escape'. Also use plural 'fires' or 'a fire' consistently; choose 'a fire' after 'escape from a fire'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, correct compound adjective hyphenation, and consistent number for nouns.