建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct nouns and plural forms, and avoid unnecessary words. Add one specific detail (e.g., how many or where) and use a linking word if you add more information.

範例: Yes, there are several tall apartment buildings near my home. For example, two high-rise blocks are right across from the park, and they house many families and shops on the ground floor.

建議: Answer directly and use correct tense. Say whether you take photos and give a specific reason and example. Use linking words like because or when to connect ideas and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings because I like their architecture. For instance, I often photograph large historic buildings when I walk around the city at sunset because the light makes their details stand out.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and then provide a specific example. If you say 'no' consider rephrasing to show nuance (e.g., not a particular building but I enjoy visiting certain types). Use linking words like however or but to connect ideas and include a brief reason.

範例: Not a single specific building, but I enjoy visiting interesting buildings in parks or tourist areas. For example, I would visit an old pavilion in the city park because it has unique carvings and a peaceful atmosphere.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and linking phrases (for example, because, although, and therefore). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and avoid repetition.

範例: No, I wouldn't like to live in a very tall building because I prefer quieter, more private spaces. For example, a low-rise apartment with a balcony and a small garden would feel more comfortable and peaceful for me.

× Yeah, they had a lot of toll building near my home there, the apartment.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home, the apartment.

The error involves singular/plural and word choice. 'Building' is singular while 'a lot of' requires a plural noun: 'buildings'. Also 'toll' is a misspelling of 'tall'. The auxiliary 'they had' is incorrect for existence; use 'there are' for present existence. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun and correct spelling.

× Yet I did some buildings, their size is very beautiful, so I very like to do the day outside.

✓ Yes, I have photographed some buildings; their sizes are very beautiful, so I really like spending the day outside.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors. 'Yet' is incorrect here; use 'Yes'. 'I did some buildings' is ungrammatical — use 'I photographed' or 'I have photographed' to convey taking photos. 'Their size is very beautiful' should be plural 'sizes' or better 'they look beautiful'. 'So I very like to do the day outside' mixes grammar and collocations: use 'I really like spending the day outside.' Suggestion: use correct verb for taking photos, match singular/plural, and use proper adverb and gerund 'spending'.

× No, but when some buildings in the park or in the tourism, I will go there.

✓ No, but when there are some buildings in the park or tourist areas, I will go there.

The sentence omits the existential 'there are' needed to state existence of buildings. 'In the tourism' is incorrect; use 'tourist areas' or 'tourist spots'. Also maintain future 'I will go there' is acceptable. Suggestion: include 'there are' and use correct noun phrase 'tourist areas'.

× I don't want to live in a very tall building. I think there's some buildings, it's beautiful and comfortable. It's very important. Is not mean that it must to be very tall.

✓ I don't want to live in a very tall building. I think there are some buildings that are beautiful and comfortable. That's very important. It does not mean that it has to be very tall.

Several errors: 'there's some buildings' mixes singular contraction 'there's' with plural 'buildings' — use 'there are'. 'it's beautiful and comfortable' should agree with plural subject: 'that are beautiful and comfortable.' 'Is not mean' is ungrammatical; use 'It does not mean'. 'must to be' is incorrect modal construction; use 'has to be' or 'must be'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns, use relative clause 'that are', and use correct modal phrasing without 'to' after 'must'.