建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh tiếng lấp đầy (uh, umm) và phát âm sai từ quan trọng. Mô tả cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: chiều cao, chức năng tòa nhà, vị trí so với nhà bạn) và dùng liên từ đơn giản để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes. There is a tall apartment building about two blocks from my house. It has around 15 floors and is mostly residential, so I often see families coming and going.

建議: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì và chia động từ) và diễn đạt lý do rõ ràng, cụ thể. Tránh câu mơ hồ như "it's a very process"; thay bằng lý do cụ thể (kiến trúc đẹp, màu sắc, chi tiết). Dùng một hoặc hai câu bổ sung để giải thích.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I like their architecture. For example, I enjoy capturing interesting facades and decorative details when I walk around the city.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng; bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp (có hoặc không) rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể nếu có. Luyện nói mạch lạc bằng cách chuẩn bị một câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (tên tòa nhà, lý do muốn đến).

範例: No, there isn't a specific building I want to visit right now. However, I would love to see the local city museum because I've heard its architecture and exhibitions are excellent.

建議: Trả lời có nhưng cần giải thích rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh tiếng lấp đầy và sửa phát âm/ngữ pháp. Nêu lí do cụ thể (view, tiện nghi, an ninh) và một ví dụ ngắn về trải nghiệm mong muốn.

範例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views would be amazing. For instance, from a high floor I could see the city skyline and enjoy quiet evenings watching the sunset.

× in the area I live, uh, has a tumbling near my home.

✓ In the area where I live, there is a building near my home.

The original sentence uses incorrect noun 'tumbling' and wrong structure for existence. Use 'there is' to indicate singular existence and use 'building' (singular). Also add 'where' to link 'area' and 'I live' correctly.

× It's a it's a rice building.

✓ It's a high-rise building.

'rice' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'high-rise' to describe a tall building. Also remove the repeated filler 'it's a'. Use 'high-rise' as a compound adjective before 'building'.

× Yes, I'm always take photo of buildings when I see it and because it is very pretty so I think it's a very process.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of buildings when I see them because they are very pretty, so I think it is a nice hobby.

Multiple issues: use simple present 'I always take' not 'I'm always take' (auxiliary misuse). 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' with plural noun. Pronoun for 'buildings' is 'them' not 'it'. 'They are' matches plural. 'Very process' is incorrect vocabulary; 'nice hobby' or 'pleasant activity' fits context. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronouns.

× Actually far I'm not have a building uh, I want to visit, but if I, umm, if I to the ones I uh, to the department, uh, in the park when, uh, I uh, leave it.

✓ Actually, I don't have a specific building I want to visit, but if I do, it would be one in the city center or in a park when I go out.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use correct negation 'I don't have' and clear relative clause 'a specific building I want to visit'. The rest seems to try to say possible locations; rephrase to 'one in the city center or in a park when I go out' to convey meaning. Keep simple present/conditional as appropriate.

× Yes, I really liked, uh, light to, uh, live in a tall building is uh, because it's a leaner in the, uh, influence and uh, near, near the earth, so I can see side in the cloud and uh, in the evening I have uh, I saw.

✓ Yes, I would really like to live in a tall building because it's higher above the ground, so I can see the clouds and enjoy the evening view.

Use conditional/wish 'I would like' instead of past 'liked'. 'Light to' is incorrect; use 'like to' or 'would like to'. 'Leaner' is wrong word; use 'higher'. 'Near the earth' is opposite of meaning; use 'above the ground'. 'See side in the cloud' corrected to 'see the clouds'. 'In the evening I have I saw' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy the evening view'. Ensure verb forms and logical word choices.