建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid repetitions, and use correct grammar (articles, plurals, and verb forms). Add one specific detail to support your statement. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town, so most structures are low-rise houses and shops. The nearest high-rise is in the city center about an hour away by bus.

建議: Answer directly, avoid hesitations and repeating words, and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of small, charming details like old doors or cafés. For instance, I often photograph colourful shopfronts when I walk around my town.

建議: Start with a direct answer and then give specific reasons why you want to visit, avoiding filler words. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and correct tense/forms. Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. I want to see it because it is the tallest building in the world and the views from the observation deck must be amazing. I hope to visit it on a future trip.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and one brief example. Correct word choice (crowded, quiet) and smoother linking (because, so) will improve clarity. Keep responses natural and avoid sentence fragments.

範例: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer a quiet, uncrowded environment. For example, I enjoy living in a small house with a garden where I can relax away from busy city noise.

× Notes far away from my home.

✓ No tall buildings near my home.

The original lacks a clear subject and verb and seems to be a fragment. Replace with a complete sentence that answers the question: 'No tall buildings are near my home' or the shorter 'No tall buildings near my home.' Ensure subject-verb presence and clarity.

× They are not near because I'm living in a very small town, so there is no large buildings, tall buildings.

✓ They are not near because I live in a very small town, so there are no large or tall buildings.

Use simple present 'I live' instead of progressive 'I'm living' for regular states. Also correct subject-verb agreement with plural 'buildings' and use 'there are' for plural existence. Combine adjectives with 'or' and remove redundant phrases.

× It's very far away from my town.

✓ The nearest tall buildings are very far from my town.

Original is ambiguous about what 'it' refers to. Clarify the subject: 'The nearest tall buildings are very far from my town.' This provides a clear subject and correct plural agreement.

× No, I don't take photos of buildings because I personally I don't like it.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I personally don't like them.

Avoid repeating 'I'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'buildings'. Maintain simple present for habitual action: 'I don't take' and 'don't like'.

× I I prefer a very small things small type of buildings that looks cute.

✓ I prefer very small buildings that look cute.

Remove repeated 'I' and incorrect article/number agreement. Use plural 'buildings' with plural verb 'look'. 'Very small things small type of' is redundant; simplify to 'very small buildings'.

× It's not in my town, not in my country, it's in Dubai.

✓ It is not in my town or country; it is in Dubai.

Combine phrases with 'or' and use proper punctuation. Maintain parallel structure for clarity.

× I want to visit Burj Khalifa. That Umm is a very big time, a big building that is his name is very big.

✓ I want to visit the Burj Khalifa. It is a very tall building and is famous.

Use the definite article 'the' with famous buildings. Replace unclear pronouns and fillers like 'Umm' and incorrect phrases 'big time' and 'his name is very big' with a clear description. Use 'tall' rather than 'big' for buildings.

× So I definitely visit that place whenever I got a chance.

✓ So I will definitely visit that place whenever I get a chance.

Use 'will' for future intention and 'get' (present simple) in the time clause 'whenever I get a chance'. 'Got' is past tense and inconsistent with the intended meaning.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× I love to live in a small building because I don't want a very. Crowded place, I don't like crowdy place.

✓ I would like to live in a small building because I don't want to live in a very crowded place; I don't like crowded places.

Fix sentence fragments and punctuation. Use 'would like' or 'prefer' for preference, and 'crowded' (not 'crowdy'). Ensure plural agreement 'places' when speaking generally.

× I like to quiet place so I prefer small.

✓ I like quiet places, so I prefer small buildings.

Use adjective 'quiet' before plural noun 'places' and add 'buildings' for clarity. 'Prefer small' is incomplete; specify 'small buildings'.