建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول إعطاء إجابة أكثر تفصيلاً وطبيعية؛ ابدأ بجملة موضوع واضحة، ثم أضف تفصيلًا واحدًا أو اثنين. انتبه إلى القواعد النحوية (مثال: use 'there are' for plural) وتحاشَ الاختصارات العامية فقط.

範例: Yes, there are a few tall apartment blocks near my home. For example, two seven-storey buildings stand about ten minutes away, and they are visible from my living room window.

建議: صغ الإجابة بشكل أبسط وأكثر وضوحًا وتجنّب الأخطاء اللغوية. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة (مثلاً: 'No, I don't usually take photos of buildings') ثم اشرح السبب بإيجاز باستخدام رابط (because/so) وقدم مثالًا محددًا.

範例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I'm more interested in people and nature. For instance, when I travel I prefer to photograph parks or street scenes rather than architecture.

建議: كن أكثر تنظيماً في الكلام: ابدأ بجملة موضوع ثم أضف أسبابًا محددة مرتبطة بالموضوع، واستخدم روابط (for example, because) وصحح الأخطاء النحوية (it/them, wish I could). تجنّب التكرار والعبارات العامية مثل 'wanna'.

範例: Yes, I'd love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it's the tallest building in the world and its design is unique. For example, I want to go to the observation deck to see the city skyline and learn about how it was built.

建議: ابدأ بجملة مباشرة وواضحة ثم أضف سببًا محددًا وواقعيًا. استبدل العامية بصيغة صحيحة ('I don't want to live in a tall building') واستخدم رابطًا لشرح السبب (because/so) وقدم مثالًا ملموسًا عن مخاوفك.

範例: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights and I'd feel uneasy on high floors. For instance, I prefer low-rise houses where I can easily go outside and feel safe.

× Yeah, there is.

✓ Yeah, there are.

The examiner asked about 'tall buildings' (plural). The response 'there is' uses singular 'is' with a plural subject; use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns. Suggestion: match 'there are' when referring to multiple items.

× Actually, I'm not a lover of filming on taking pictures to anything.

✓ Actually, I'm not someone who likes filming or taking pictures of anything.

The original mixes incorrect prepositions and gerund forms. Use 'someone who likes' plus gerunds 'filming' and 'taking pictures' and the correct preposition 'of' for objects. Suggestion: separate activities with 'or' and use 'of' for the thing being photographed.

× Yeah, there is one building I wanna visit the next days.

✓ Yeah, there is one building I want to visit in the next few days.

Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to'; 'the next days' is ungrammatical — use 'in the next few days' to indicate a near future period. Ensure verb 'want to visit' expresses future intent.

× His name is, uh, Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

✓ Its name is Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

Buildings are referred to with the neutral possessive 'its', not 'his'. Use 'its' for non-human nouns. Suggestion: use 'Its name is...' or simply 'It's Burj Khalifa in Dubai.'

× What what can I say that they're really amazing building and never see something like that.

✓ What can I say? It's a really amazing building; I've never seen anything like it.

Original has repetition, wrong pronoun 'they're' for singular 'building', missing articles, and incorrect tense/structure 'never see something like that'. Correct with contraction 'it's' or 'it is', include article 'a', and use present perfect 'I've never seen' plus 'anything like it'.

× Very high, very, very large.

✓ It's very tall and very large.

Standalone fragments lack subject and verb; 'high' is less natural for buildings than 'tall'. Combine into a full sentence 'It's very tall and very large.' Suggestion: avoid fragments in spoken answers when clarity is needed.

× I wish I can visit, visit it one day.

✓ I wish I could visit it one day.

After 'I wish' use past modal 'could' to express a hypothetical or desire contrary to present reality, not 'can'. Also remove repeated 'visit'. Suggestion: use 'I hope I can visit one day' for a realistic expectation or 'I wish I could visit' for a wistful hypothetical.

× I don't wanna lie.

✓ I don't want to live there.

The student likely meant 'live' not 'lie'. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. Also include 'there' to specify location. Suggestion: speak clearly: 'I don't want to live there.'

× I'm very scared of tall building.

✓ I'm very scared of tall buildings.

Use plural 'buildings' after 'scared of' when referring generally to tall buildings, and include plural agreement. Also 'scared of' is correct phrase. Suggestion: say 'I'm very scared of tall buildings.'

× I don't like it at all. At all. I don't like it.

✓ I don't like it at all.

Repetition is unnecessary and creates disfluent speech. A single clear sentence suffices. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same sentence; be concise and natural.