建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接且完整。先用一句话回答问题（肯定/否定），然后补充具体细节并使用连接词使句子连贯。注意避免句子未完或重复，例如把“they are all tall and.”改为完整表达。可以加入数量、用途或距离等具体信息。

範例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large department store and a multi-story supermarket within a five-minute walk, so the area feels quite urban and busy.

建議: 回答要更自然，避免句子断裂，并用连词衔接想法。先给出直接回答，再说明例外情况并给具体例子（例如某类建筑或拍摄场景）。注意时态和词序。

範例: Not usually. I only take photos of buildings when they look spectacular, such as historic cathedrals or modern skyscrapers, otherwise I prefer photographing people like my friends and family.

建議: 回答需要更准确且语句通顺。先直接答“Yes”，然后说明具体建筑和原因，避免词语错误（例如把“Taipei 101 things”改为“Taipei 101”，不要把Taiwan说成Denmark）。给出具体原因和期待的活动。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101. Although I have lived in Taiwan for about 20 years, I have never been there; I want to go to the observation deck to see the city view and learn about the building's engineering.

建議: 回答要更简洁并使用连接词改进逻辑。先直接回答，再给出清晰原因并提供细节（如具体感受或经历）。语法上注意‘11 stairs’应改为‘an 11-storey building’或‘on the 11th floor’。

範例: No, I don't. I currently live in an 11-storey building, and whenever there is an earthquake I feel nervous and uncomfortable, so I would prefer a lower-floor apartment for peace of mind.

× They are all tall and.

✓ They are all tall.

原句中以連詞"and"結尾，造成句子不完整。應刪除多餘的"and"或在後面補充並列內容。建議刪除該連詞即可使句子完整。

× Actually, I don't really take photos of buildings, only if they are.

✓ Actually, I don't really take photos of buildings, only if they are very spectacular or amazing.

原句在"only if they are."處留下不完整的從句。需要將後半句與下一句合併，避免省略導致句子不完整。建議把描述完整連成一句。

× Very spectacular or amazing.

✓ They are very spectacular or amazing.

這是一個片語獨立成句，缺少主語和謂語，使其成為不完整句。應與前一句合併或補上主語和謂語。建議與前一句合併為"only if they are very spectacular or amazing"。

× Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 things.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101.

原句中多出單詞"things"造成冗餘和語義不明。應刪除不必要的詞以符合自然表達。

× I have lived in Taiwan for about 20 years, but I never take a trip there.

✓ I have lived in Taiwan for about 20 years, but I have never taken a trip there.

前半句使用現在完成時表示持續的狀態，後半句應使用現在完成時的否定形式"have never taken"來表示至今未做過某事。原句使用簡單現在時"never take"與語境時態不匹配。

× So I hope I have a chance to visit the famous Denmark of Taiwan.

✓ So I hope I have a chance to visit the famous landmark of Taiwan.

原句使用"Denmark"不合語境且是專有名詞錯用，應使用合適名詞如"landmark"或直接說"famous Taipei 101"。此外詞序需自然，建議改為"the famous landmark of Taiwan"或"the famous Taipei 101"。

× No, although I am living in a tall building of 11 stairs since whenever there is an earthquake I always feel nervous and I cannot do anything comfortably.

✓ No. Although I live in an 11‑story tall building, whenever there is an earthquake I always feel nervous and I cannot feel comfortable.

多處問題："I am living"可改為一般現在時"I live"表示常態；"of 11 stairs"用法不當，應用"11‑story"或"11‑storey"來描述樓層；句子連接處應用標點分隔；最後"do anything comfortably"措辭不自然，改為"feel comfortable"更恰當。