建筑— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there tall buildings near your home?
考生
Uh, there are many tall buildings near my home. Uh, so apart from the building, building and accommodation, there are so many because I my home is right in the middle of the city.
考官
Do you take photos of buildings?
考生
Yes, I do take photo of buildings near my homes.
考官
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
考生
There is a building near my home that I would love to visit that is a really tall buildings uh have many apt. I would really love to buy a apartment there.
考官
Do you want to live in a tall building?
考生
Yes, I do love to be to live in a tall buildings, especially in a tall apartment blocks that have a very good infrastructure and standing up there watching around you just wait.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there tall buildings near your home?
分數: 60.0建議: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng và mạch lạc: tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; mở đầu trực tiếp trả lời rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Tập dùng liên từ (because, so, and) đúng chỗ và giới hạn câu tối đa 4-5 câu.
範例: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center. Most of them are office towers and apartment blocks. For instance, there is a 30-storey residential tower just two blocks away.
Do you take photos of buildings?
分數: 70.0建議: Trả lời nên đầy đủ hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết bổ sung: nêu tần suất, lý do hoặc phong cách chụp để phong phú nội dung; tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít (home/homes).
範例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings near my home. I usually photograph interesting facades and modern glass towers because I like architectural details. I sometimes share the pictures on social media.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
分數: 55.0建議: Cần cấu trúc rõ ràng: mở bằng câu chủ đề rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (singular/plural, articles) và tránh lặp từ. Hạn chế dùng tiếng lắp (uh).
範例: Yes, there is a very tall residential building nearby that I would like to visit. It has many modern apartments and excellent amenities, and I am interested because I might consider buying an apartment there in the future.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
分數: 50.0建議: Cần diễn đạt rõ ý và sắp xếp câu mạch lạc: trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do cụ thể (infrastructure, view), sửa ngữ pháp (articles, plural) và bỏ phần lặp/không rõ nghĩa. Giữ tối đa 4 câu.
範例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, mainly because of the good infrastructure and facilities they offer. Also, the high floors provide great views of the city, which I enjoy. For example, I imagine relaxing on a balcony and watching the skyline in the evening.
文法
× Uh, there are many tall buildings near my home. Uh, so apart from the building, building and accommodation, there are so many because I my home is right in the middle of the city.
✓ Uh, there are many tall buildings near my home. Uh, apart from the buildings and accommodations, there are so many because my home is right in the middle of the city.
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