建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, plural forms), reduce hesitations, and make the response more concise with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use a linking word to contrast home and work area.

範例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home; most are only five or six storeys high. However, near my workplace there is a very tall building, in fact one of the tallest in Bangladesh.

建議: Correct noun plurals and verb forms, avoid repetition, and organize the reasons with linking words (for example, first/second). Be specific about what attracts you to photograph a building.

範例: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings. For example, if a building has a distinctive view or unique architectural style, or if it reflects Bangladesh’s heritage, I will take pictures to capture those features.

建議: Make a clear topic sentence naming the building, fix grammar and word order, and give one or two specific reasons (designer, features) using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and ensure correct proper noun usage.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the National Parliament House. It was designed by the architect Louis Kahn and is famous for its striking geometric forms and symbolic use of light, which I find fascinating.

建議: Organize the answer with a concise topic sentence and two clear, specific reasons using linking words (for example, firstly/also). Correct vocabulary (less pollution → less noise/pollution) and remove unnecessary fillers.

範例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. Firstly, it often offers better views of the city, and secondly, higher floors can be quieter and have fresher air than street-level flats.

× There is no tall buildings uh that is near to my home.

✓ There are no tall buildings near my home.

Subject and verb number must agree: 'buildings' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also 'near to' is incorrect; use 'near'. Remove filler word 'uh' and redundant 'that'. Suggestion: identify the head noun plurality and choose matching verb, and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× All the buildings is about 5 to 6 stores buildings.

✓ All the buildings are about five to six storeys high.

Plural subject 'buildings' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Stores' is incorrect for building levels; use 'storeys' or 'stories' and place adjective 'high' after a measurement. Also avoid repeating 'buildings' unnecessarily. Use numerals in words for speech: 'five to six' or 'five or six'.

× However, in my work area there is a tall building which is one of the tallest building in Bangladesh and.

✓ However, in my work area there is a tall building which is one of the tallest buildings in Bangladesh.

Mix of singular and plural: 'one of the tallest' must be followed by plural noun 'buildings'. Remove trailing conjunction 'and'. Ensure clause is complete.

× Yes, sometimes I take photos of the buildings.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos of buildings.

Use no article 'the' unless referring to specific known buildings. 'Buildings' plural is fine. Removing 'the' makes the sentence general and natural.

× Whenever building have a different view or bring or carries a heritage of our Bangladesh or a unique style or unique architecture is present in the building, that's time I took pictures of buildings.

✓ Whenever a building has an interesting view, carries the heritage of Bangladesh, or features unique architecture, I take pictures of it.

Multiple errors: missing article before 'building' and wrong verb forms. Use 'a building has' (singular requires 'has'), not 'have'. Remove awkward 'bring or carries' and use 'carries the heritage'. Use present simple 'I take' for habitual action instead of past 'I took'. Replace plural 'buildings' with pronoun 'it' when referring to one building. Reorder clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to visit a building that is our national parliament, Parliament House that was a great unique architecture revolution I think is one of the best parliament building in our world and Saint Louis who actually designed this building and is unique features make it really.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit our national Parliament House. It is a great and unique architectural achievement; I think it is one of the best parliamentary buildings in the world. It was designed by Louis Kahn, and its unique features make it remarkable.

Many article and structure errors: use 'Parliament House' with definite reference and capitalize properly. 'A great unique architecture revolution' is incorrect; use 'a great and unique architectural achievement'. 'One of the best parliament building' needs plural 'buildings'. Name 'Louis Kahn' corrects 'Saint Louis who actually designed'. Use possessive 'its unique features'. Break into sentences for clarity and correct verb tenses.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because when you live in a tall building, say you there is a less pollution and the scenario or the view you're getting from the toy stores building, the city life and everything is so impressive at the same time and the air is very fresh out there so.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because, when you live in one, there is less pollution and the view of the city is impressive. The air tends to be fresher up there.

Problems include awkward phrasing and incorrect expressions: 'a less pollution' should be 'less pollution' (no article), and 'toy stores building' is meaningless—likely 'tall storey building' intended. Simplify to 'one' to avoid repetition. Use 'the view of the city' and present simple for general truth. 'Air is very fresh out there' becomes 'air tends to be fresher up there'. Also remove filler 'so' and reorganize sentences for clarity.