建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with word choice and minor grammar. Use a clear topic sentence, correct collocations (e.g., "office buildings" not "outfit buildings"), and avoid redundancy by combining related ideas. Add a linking word to connect the ideas about appearance and facilities.

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in Bangkok. Most are condominiums and office buildings, so the area looks modern; moreover, they provide useful facilities such as restaurants and convenience stores.

建議: Correct grammar and word forms, and improve fluency with linking phrases. Use plural forms and adverb placement correctly (e.g., "Sometimes" not "Sometime", "beautiful architecture" not "beautiful architectures"). Keep sentences concise and natural.

範例: Sometimes, especially when I travel, I take photos if I see a building with beautiful architecture or an amazing view. However, I usually don't photograph ordinary buildings.

建議: Good concise response with clear reason. Improve cohesion by adding a linking word and a small detail about why sunset matters or what you expect to see to make the answer more specific.

範例: I would like to visit the King Power Mahanakhon in Bangkok because its glass skywalk looks exciting. Additionally, I’ve heard the sunset views are spectacular, so I hope to see the city light up as the sun goes down.

建議: Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "high-rise building", "usually offers a glazed view", "a gym"), and combine sentences for coherence. Explain briefly why you prefer lower floors to show reasoning and use linking words.

範例: Yes, I think I would. Living in a high-rise building usually offers a glazed view and convenient facilities like a gym and a swimming pool; however, I wouldn’t want to live on a very high floor because I’m a little afraid of heights, so I’d prefer a middle floor.

× Most of them are condominiums and outfit buildings.

✓ Most of them are condominiums and office buildings.

The word 'outfit buildings' is incorrect; likely intended 'office buildings'. Also ensure plural forms match count: 'condominiums and office buildings' correctly uses plural nouns for multiple buildings.

× Sometime, especially when I travel, if I see a building with beautiful architectures or an amazing view, I would definitely take some photo.

✓ Sometimes, especially when I travel, if I see a building with beautiful architecture or an amazing view, I would definitely take some photos.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'Architectures' is uncountable and should be 'architecture'. 'Some photo' is incorrect; use plural 'some photos' or 'a photo'. Also modal 'would' is acceptable for hypothetical habitual action but 'will' or simple present 'I definitely take photos' could also be used; 'would definitely take some photos' is fine for conditional contexts.

× The glass skywalk looks exciting and I have heard the view is amazing, especially at sunset.

✓ The glass skywalk looks exciting and I have heard the view is amazing, especially at sunset.

No grammatical article error here; sentence is acceptable. No change needed. (Included for completeness as it meets no listed error types.)

× Living in highlights building usually offer glazed view and convenient facilities like a gyms and swimming pool.

✓ Living in a high-rise building usually offers glazed views and convenient facilities like a gym and a swimming pool.

Multiple issues: 'highlights building' is incorrect; intended 'high-rise building'. 'Living in' is followed by singular 'a high-rise building' so verb must be 'offers' (singular). 'Glazed view' should be plural 'glazed views' or 'a glazed view'; 'a gym' not 'a gyms'. Also add articles 'a' before 'high-rise building' and 'a' before 'gym' and 'a' before 'swimming pool' for correct noun phrases.

× Sometime, especially when I travel, if I see a building with beautiful architectures or an amazing view, I would definitely take some photo.

✓ Sometimes, especially when I travel, if I see a building with beautiful architecture or an amazing view, I would definitely take some photos.

Placement of 'especially when I travel' is acceptable, but 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (spelling and adverb form). This repeats earlier correction but emphasizes correct adverb form and word order choices.

× However, I don't usually take pictures of ordinary buildings.

✓ However, I don't usually take pictures of ordinary buildings.

This sentence is correct; pronoun and structure are fine. No change needed. (Included to show it meets no listed error types.)

× I would like to visit the King Power Mahanakorn building in Bangkok.

✓ I would like to visit the King Power Mahanakorn building in Bangkok.

Sentence is grammatically correct; 'would like to' correctly expresses a polite desire. No change needed.

× They make the area look modern and provide many useful facilities like restaurants and convenience stores.

✓ They make the area look modern and provide many useful facilities like restaurants and convenience stores.

This sentence is correct: plural subject 'They' correctly pairs with plural verbs 'make' and 'provide'. No change needed.

× However, I would not want to live on a very high floor because I'm a little afraid of heights.

✓ However, I would not want to live on a very high floor because I'm a little afraid of heights.

This sentence is correct; modal 'would' and verb 'want' agree, and the clause is fine. No change needed.