建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Fix verb agreement and reduce repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “which” correctly.

範例: Yes. There is a tall building near my home — the Sheng Shui Shopping Center. It doubles as a shopping mall and office complex, so many companies rent space there, which makes it very busy during weekdays.

建議: Answer directly, avoid filler words, and use clearer linking phrases. Give one concise reason and a specific example with correct phrasing (e.g., “rich in history” not “historical values”).

範例: Sometimes — it depends on the building. For example, when I visited Europe last year I photographed an old cathedral because it has rich historical features and architectural details that are very different from buildings in Hong Kong.

建議: Make your response more fluent and correct article and plural use. Combine sentences to avoid redundancy and use specific reasons why you want to visit. Use linking words like “because” or “since.”

範例: Yes — I’d love to visit the World Trade Center in New York because the complex consists of several towers and has an extensive underground transit concourse, which is quite different from the World Trade Center in Hong Kong.

建議: Be more precise and eliminate fillers and repetition. State the main idea, then give one or two clear reasons with correct word forms (e.g., “residents” not “residence”).

範例: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building usually means many residents, so it’s easier to meet and socialize with neighbors and join community activities.

× It is very tall because it houses a lot of offices for a lot of company and there are lots of people work there.

✓ It is very tall because it houses a lot of offices for a lot of companies and there are lots of people working there.

The word 'company' should be plural ('companies') when referring to many firms (quantifier error). Also 'people work there' needs the -ing form ('working') to form a reduced relative clause describing the people present. Suggestion: use plural nouns with quantifiers and use the -ing form after expressions like 'there are lots of people' to describe ongoing activity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 14

× I believe it depends on the types of building I see.

✓ I believe it depends on the types of buildings I see.

When speaking generally about types, the countable noun 'building' should be plural ('buildings') after 'types of'. This is a present-tense general statement, so keep present tense. Suggestion: match 'types of' with a plural noun. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× it is built very different than Hong Kong.

✓ it is built very differently compared to Hong Kong.

The adjective 'different' should be used as an adverb 'differently' to modify 'built' (use of adverb vs adjective). Also use 'compared to' or 'compared with' rather than 'than' when making such comparisons with adverbial form. Suggestion: use adverbial form and a correct comparison phrase. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Although there are World Trade Center in Hong Kong as well.

✓ Although there is a World Trade Center in Hong Kong as well.

The subject here is a single building name 'World Trade Center' so the verb and article should be singular ('is'). Using 'are' suggests plural. If referring to multiple centers, change the noun to plural. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and use appropriate article. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× However, I heard that it is very different from Hong Kong as there are at least three towers in the US and a underground subway.

✓ However, I heard that it is very different from Hong Kong as there are at least three towers in the US and an underground subway.

The article before a vowel sound should be 'an' not 'a' ('an underground'). Also 'towers' is fine plural. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× living in a tall building means that there are lots of people who will residence in here and I'm able to talk and and socialize with my neighbors so I can meet a lot of people.

✓ living in a tall building means that there are lots of people who will reside here and I'm able to talk and socialize with my neighbors so I can meet a lot of people.

The noun 'residence' is incorrect as a verb; the correct verb is 'reside'. Also 'in here' is redundant; use 'here'. Remove the duplicated 'and'. Ensure verb forms match (will reside). Suggestion: use correct verb forms, avoid redundancy, and remove repeated words. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× there are lots of people work there.

✓ there are lots of people working there.

After 'there are lots of people', use the -ing form 'working' to indicate ongoing action; 'people work there' is a full clause and less natural here. Suggestion: use participle to describe people present or performing an action. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8},{