建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response grammatical, concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words if adding details (for example, "In fact" or "For example").

範例: Yes. There is a very tall building near my home called 3 Tower. In fact, it is one of the tallest buildings in my country, with around 200 floors, and its design looks very impressive.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and then explain conditions briefly and clearly. Use linking words like "but" or "however" and avoid filler phrases such as "actually" or "in the future" unless necessary. Keep it within three sentences.

範例: Not usually. However, I do take photos when a building looks particularly pretty or has a unique architectural design. I also take pictures only when I feel like it or when I'm in a good mood.

建議: Start with a clear answer, then give specific reasons and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and provide one concrete detail about why you want to visit.

範例: Yes. If I had the chance, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is famous worldwide and has an incredible view from the observation deck. For example, I would love to see the city panorama from the top.

建議: Answer directly and then give two clear reasons using linking words such as "because" and "for example". Avoid repeating phrases and improve grammar (use plural/singular consistently and correct tense).

範例: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because I think it can be risky in emergencies. For example, I prefer living on the first or second floor so it is more comfortable and I can evacuate quickly if needed.

× Yes it is. The building name is called 3 tower is like really tall building like you can say it is tallest building in my country and it's really pretty and the floor is still 200th floor.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings. One is called 3 Tower; it is a really tall building — you could say it is the tallest building in my country, and it's very pretty. It even has around the 200th floor.

Problems: multiple subject-verb agreement and article issues. 'Yes it is' is incorrect because the question asks about plural 'buildings', so reply should use plural 'there are' (Grammar ID 27 and 3). 'The building name is called 3 tower' is awkward and redundant; use 'One is called 3 Tower'. 'is like really tall building' lacks article and uses filler 'like' (Grammar ID 22 and 13). 'it is tallest' needs definite article 'the tallest' (Grammar ID 22). 'the floor is still 200th floor' is ungrammatical; clarified to 'It even has around the 200th floor.' Suggestion: match singular/plural of question, use 'there is/there are' appropriately, include definite/indefinite articles before singular nouns, avoid filler 'like', and use 'the tallest' for superlative with definite article.

× Not really, I'm not big fan of buildings so if it's really pretty or unique structure like architectures then yes I will take pictures of it in the future and if my mood is actually good then only, if not then I won't take any pictures.

✓ Not really. I'm not a big fan of buildings, so if a building is really pretty or has a unique design, I will take pictures of it in the future — but only if I'm in a good mood; otherwise I won't.

Problems: missing article before 'big fan' and incorrect pronoun/reference and word choice (Grammar ID 22 and 12 and 13). 'I'm not big fan' should be 'I'm not a big fan'. 'unique structure like architectures' is incorrect: use 'unique design' or 'unique architecture' and keep singular reference to 'a building'. 'if my mood is actually good then only' should be 'only if I'm in a good mood' for correct pronoun and adverb placement (Grammar ID 20). Suggestion: include articles before countable nouns, use consistent pronouns, prefer 'architecture' or 'design' without pluralizing incorrectly, and place adverbs in natural positions.

× Not really, but if I get a chance to visit a building, it would be Burj Khalifa. It is really famous around the world and it will be really good to visit that place since everyone is big fan of it. If I go there, it will be pleasure and good.

✓ Not really, but if I had a chance to visit a building, it would be the Burj Khalifa. It is really famous around the world, and it would be great to visit since everyone is a big fan of it. If I went there, it would be a pleasure.

Problems: mixed conditional/modal and article errors (Grammar IDs 7, 5, and 22). 'if I get a chance... it would be' mixes present and conditional; use 'if I had a chance... it would be' or 'if I get a chance... it will be'. 'the Burj Khalifa' needs the definite article (Grammar ID 22). 'everyone is big fan' missing article 'a big fan' (Grammar ID 22). 'it will be pleasure and good' is ungrammatical; use 'it would be a pleasure' or 'it would be great'. Suggestion: keep conditional forms consistent (second conditional for hypothetical events), use articles before proper nouns when conventional, and use natural collocations like 'a pleasure' and 'great'.

× In my opinion no because I feel it's risky to live in tall building. I did prefer to live like mentioned type of houses so it will be really good first and 2nd floor only. So it's really comfortable and good. If any risky things happen I can just rush out.

✓ In my opinion, no, because I feel it's risky to live in a tall building. I would prefer to live in the types of houses I mentioned, so the first or second floor would be best. That would be more comfortable and safer. If anything risky happened, I could just rush out.

Problems: article errors and tense/modal issues (Grammar IDs 22 and 7). 'in tall building' needs 'a tall building'. 'I did prefer' is wrong; use 'I would prefer' to express preference. 'like mentioned type of houses' should be 'the types of houses I mentioned' (pronoun/word order). 'so it will be really good first and 2nd floor only' is ungrammatical; use 'the first or second floor would be best'. 'If any risky things happen' should be 'If anything risky happened' or 'If anything risky happens' with consistent tense; here conditional past 'happened' fits 'would'/'could' structure. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns, use conditional/modal verbs consistently to express preferences and hypothetical outcomes, and choose natural phrasing for floors and safety.