食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one brief reason or contrast. Avoid filler words (like, um) and repetition. Use a linking phrase if you add a second item (for example, “and” or “as for”).

範例: My favourite food is dragon fruit because it’s refreshing and sweet. As for fast food, I enjoy pizza because it’s convenient and has many topping options.

建議: Answer with a clear past tense sentence and include a short specific detail (reason, memory, or example). Remove filler repetitions and use linking words if listing items.

範例: When I was young, I liked fruits such as bananas and apples because they were easy to eat and my parents often packed them for school.

建議: Give a direct yes/no, then explain with a specific example or two and use linking words (for example, "in summer", "during winter", "for example"). Avoid repeating words and use exact phrases like “seasonal fruits” or “holiday dishes.”

範例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more seasonal fruits like mangoes and watermelon, while in winter I prefer soups and stews to stay warm.

建議: Respond directly using present perfect or simple present to compare past and present. Provide a brief reason why it hasn’t changed or, if it has, explain how. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

範例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed since I was a child because I have always enjoyed the sweet taste and texture of dragon fruit.

× My favorite food is like dragon fruit and my favorite like fast food is pizza.

✓ My favorite food is dragon fruit, and my favorite fast food is pizza.

The sentence contains unnecessary filler word like and an incorrect placement of like. Remove 'like' when stating preferences directly and place commas to join clauses. Use 'my favorite fast food is pizza' rather than 'my favorite like fast food is pizza'. Suggestion: State preferences without 'like' (e.g., 'My favorite food is...').

× I like like banana apples like that.

✓ I liked bananas and apples when I was young.

The question asks about the past (when you were young), so use past tense 'liked'. Also remove repeated filler 'like' and use correct plural forms 'bananas' and 'apples'. Suggestion: Answer past-time questions with past tense and avoid filler repetition.

× Of course I of course, of course I eat new new varieties of the food.

✓ Of course I eat new varieties of food.

There is excessive repetition and an unnecessary article 'the' before 'food'. Use simple present 'eat' because the question asks about habitual actions. Remove duplicate words 'of course' and 'new'. Suggestion: Keep answers concise: 'Of course, I eat new varieties of food.'

× No, that was my favorite. I never change when I was young.

✓ No, that was my favorite. I never changed when I was young.

The first sentence correctly uses past 'was'. The second sentence describes a past habit, so use past tense 'changed', not present 'change'. Suggestion: Use past tense for actions completed or habitual in the past: 'I never changed when I was young.'