食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 语法和用词需要纠正，句子不够连贯且有拼写错误。回答要直接开门见山（主题句），然后用一到两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使句子更流畅；注意名词单复数和动词时态。可以把信息控制在最多五句话。

範例: My favourite food is salad. I like salads because they are fresh and healthy, and they help me feel energetic. For lunch I often choose a salad since it’s quick to prepare and easy to eat. Besides, I can add different ingredients like chicken or avocado to keep it interesting.

建議: 时态和词汇使用不准确，句子含糊且有拼写错误。回答要用过去时描述童年习惯，提供具体例子并用连接词衔接。尽量避免不必要的重复，控制在三到四句内。

範例: When I was young, I loved eating fruits, especially in spring and summer. My grandparents encouraged me to eat more fruit, so I often had fruit salad as a snack after school. I remember enjoying peaches and berries the most.

建議: 回答含糊且有语法错误，使用不恰当的词汇（如 'creep'）。应直接回答并给出原因，使用连词让逻辑清晰。注意主谓一致和动词形式。建议提供一到两条具体例子说明季节性或不改变的原因。

範例: Not really — I usually eat the same foods throughout the year because I am busy and prefer simple meals. Supermarkets here sell most ingredients year-round, so I don’t need to change my diet with the seasons.

建議: 时态和句子结构混乱，有拼写和语法错误。应直接回答（使用现在完成时或现在时），并用一到两句具体细节说明原因或例子，保持语言简洁且连贯。

範例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed — I’ve always loved dumplings. My family still makes them often, so I get to eat them whenever we have family meals.

× There are fresh and healthy and I think eating salads help me.

✓ They are fresh and healthy, and I think eating salads helps me.

该句中原本用“There are”指代不可数名词或复数时要用正确的主语代词“they”。此外，“help”需要与单数主语“eating salads”（作为单一活动）或更自然地理解为第三人称单数搭配时用第三人称单数动词“helps”。综合来看，此句应使用复数代词或将动作视为单一活动并调整动词。建议在表达时：1) 用正确的主语（they）指代前文复数名词；2) 注意动词与主语的人称一致。

× I often mark salad of lunch because they are quicker and easy.

✓ I often make salad for lunch because they are quicker and easy.

原句中“mark salad of lunch”不是正确的搭配，推测说话者想表达“做沙拉当午餐”，应用“make salad for lunch”。另外“they are quicker and easy”中有并列形容词时需要一致性，建议改为“quicker and easier”或“quick and easy”。此处若要比较应提供比较对象，直接用“quick and easy”更自然。改为“I often make salad for lunch because they are quick and easy.”较为恰当。

× I like eating fruits, especially what Mayo and summer and spring.

✓ I liked eating fruits, especially in May, summer, and spring.

该句时态与问题（过去）不匹配，考官问“when you were young”，应使用过去时“liked”。另外原句“what Mayo”是不正确的词汇，应为月份“May”，并且要用介词“in May”。建议：1) 使用过去时态；2) 正确拼写月份并使用介词“in”；3) 列举季节时用逗号分隔。

× My grandparents always taught me to eating more fruits so I hold the fruit salad as snake after school.

✓ My grandparents always taught me to eat more fruit, so I had a fruit salad as a snack after school.

动词不定式结构应为“to eat”，而不是“to eating”。“fruits”在此语境更自然用不可数“fruit”或“fruit snacks”，且“hold the fruit salad as snake”完全不合语义，推测为“have a fruit salad as a snack”。因此需要：1) 将不定式改为“to eat”；2) 用正确名词形式“fruit”；3) 使用习惯搭配“have ... as a snack”；4) 时态与上下文保持过去时。

× No, I usually eating the same foods always.

✓ No, I usually eat the same foods all the time.

“usually”后面应使用一般现在时动词“eat”，而不是现在分词“eating”。此外“always”与“usually”重复，改为“all the time”更自然。建议：用“I usually eat ...”结构表达通常习惯。

× Yeah because I am busy and like to creep things.

✓ Yeah, because I am busy and like to keep things simple.

原句“creep things”不合语义，推测意为“keep things simple”（保持事情简单）。此外“because”引导从句前加逗号更清晰。建议：使用正确的动词短语“keep things simple”。

× Simple supermarket have most foods all the time so I don't really change what I eat.

✓ Simple supermarkets have most foods all the time, so I don't really change what I eat.

主语与动词不一致：复数主语“supermarkets”需搭配复数动词“have”。原句可能要指“一些简单的超市”或“simple supermarkets”；同时在复数情况下需调整冠词或复数形式。建议保持主谓一致，使用复数形式或在单数时加入冠词。

× No, my favorite foods hadn't change.

✓ No, my favorite foods haven't changed.

原句使用过去完成时态“hadn't change”且动词“change”未用过去分词形式。根据上下文，表示到现在为止未改变，应使用现在完成时“haven't changed”。同时“change”需用过去分词“changed”。建议使用“haven't changed”。

× I've always loved dumplings saying I was a change and I still enjoy eating them now.

✓ I've always loved dumplings since I was a child, and I still enjoy eating them now.

原句“saying I was a change”不通顺，猜测意思是“从小就喜欢”（since I was a child）。因此需用连接词“since”引导时间状语，保持现在完成时“I've always loved”。建议明确时间短语并用连词连接句子。

× My family still making them a lot so I never get to try of them.

✓ My family still makes them a lot, so I always get to try them.

“still making”需要用现在时“三单”形式“still makes”或更自然的“still make them a lot”视主语为family（可视作单数）。“I never get to try of them”有多重错误：应为“I always get to try them”或“I never get tired of them”根据语境应是经常有机会吃到，所以用“always get to try them”。去掉多余介词“of”。建议：1) 主谓一致；2) 用正确短语“get to try them”或“get tired of them”。