食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak more fluently and reduce fillers (uh, umm). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "people in Korea usually choose fried chicken," "its softness").

範例: My favourite food is pizza. I prefer it to fried chicken, which many people in Korea like, because I enjoy the melted cheese and tangy tomato sauce. Also, I like the soft, thin crust, which makes it easy to eat on the go.

建議: Clarify tense and finish your sentences. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and avoid unfinished thoughts. Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples or reasons with linking words.

範例: When I was young I loved sweet foods, especially ice cream. I used to eat ice cream almost every day because my parents often bought it as a treat, but as I grew older I began trying more savory dishes.

建議: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct verb forms and clearer linking words (e.g., "however," "in summer"). Be specific about examples and keep sentences concise. Avoid repetition and fix agreement ("changes" → "change").

範例: I don't have dramatic changes in my diet, but in summer I usually eat more fruits and salads because they feel refreshing. In contrast, during cold months I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.

建議: Use correct grammar and a clear structure: state your position then support it with reasons. Remove hesitations and correct mistakes ("I haven't changed," "Pizza has been my favourite food since childhood"). Add a brief reason why it remained your favourite.

範例: My favourite food hasn't changed; pizza has been my favourite since I was a child. I still enjoy it because of the variety of toppings and the comforting combination of cheese and tomato sauce.

× people in Korea usually pick uh, fried chicken over the pizza.

✓ people in Korea usually pick fried chicken over pizza.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before general plural nouns like 'pizza' and before 'fried chicken' when speaking generally. Remove 'the' to make it a general statement. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× I love cheese and tomato sauce and it's softness, yes.

✓ I love cheese and tomato sauce and their softness, yes.

'It' is singular and does not agree with the plural concept of 'cheese and tomato sauce.' Use 'their' to refer to both items or rephrase to 'the soft texture' for a single quality. This fixes pronoun agreement. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× I really like sweet things like most children, but umm and I really love ice creams.

✓ I really liked sweet things like most children, and I really loved ice cream.

The question asked about when the student was young, so past tense should be used. Also 'ice cream' is typically uncountable in this context, so use singular form 'ice cream.' Change verbs to past tense 'liked' and 'loved.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× When I was young I eat ice cream every day and when I enter other food I.

✓ When I was young I ate ice cream every day and when I tried other foods I couldn't stop eating them.

The verb should be in past tense: 'eat' -> 'ate.' The second clause was incomplete and unclear; 'enter other food' is incorrect — use 'tried other foods' and complete the idea. Ensure verbs match the past timeframe. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× I don't think I have a dramatic changes in what I'm eating,

✓ I don't think I have dramatic changes in what I eat,

'A dramatic changes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or change noun to singular. Also use simple present 'eat' for habitual actions instead of present continuous 'I'm eating.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× but in the summer I usually eat more fruits and vegetables than winter and when it was even when it cold I really enjoy hot soup.

✓ but in the summer I usually eat more fruits and vegetables than in winter, and when it is cold I really enjoy hot soup.

Compare seasons with 'in winter' and maintain parallel structure. Use present tense 'is' for general statements about weather. Remove redundant words 'even when' and fix preposition use. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I don't think I'm changed.

✓ I don't think I've changed.

Use present perfect 'I've changed' to describe a change from childhood to now. 'I'm changed' is not idiomatic for expressing personal change over time. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Umm Pisa was my favorite.

✓ Umm, pizza was my favorite.

Correct spelling 'Pizza' and do not capitalize unnecessarily. No article is needed when stating a general favorite. Also ensure correct noun form. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Pizza is favorite food since I was young.

✓ Pizza has been my favorite food since I was young.

Use present perfect 'has been' to link a past starting point to the present. Include possessive 'my' and the article 'the' is not required before 'favorite' when using 'my favorite.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Uh, when I was kid, I still always enjoyed pizza and still I am.

✓ Uh, when I was a kid, I always enjoyed pizza and still do.

Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'kid.' Use 'always enjoyed' for past habit and 'still do' to concisely state the current continuing preference. Remove redundant words for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22