食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh lặp từ (“My favorite” hai lần) và câu không hoàn chỉnh như “I eat.” Nên có một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó là 1–2 câu bổ sung với liên từ hợp lý (because, since, when). Chú ý thì động từ khi kể quá khứ (ate) và hiện tại (like/love).

範例: My favourite food is pizza. I first tried it when I was eight because my aunt bought one for me from a fast-food restaurant, and I loved the taste.

建議: Cần dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về sở thích lúc nhỏ (“liked”), tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn và các cụm từ không chuẩn như “I feel so lovely”. Dùng liên từ hợp lý (because, so) và diễn đạt cụ thể hơn lý do vì sao thích. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: When I was young, I liked pizza very much because I tried it for the first time and enjoyed its flavour and texture, so I ate it often.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và đúng thì. Tránh thông tin mơ hồ như “on 20/24”. Dùng thì phù hợp: hiện tại đơn cho thói quen hiện tại (I usually eat) và quá khứ cho thói quen trước kia (I used to eat). Nên giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao thay đổi (e.g., for health or season).

範例: Yes. In winter I used to eat more fish and noodles because they are warming, but now I usually eat healthier meals, like vegetables and lean protein, because I am trying to lose weight.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc: xác nhận việc thay đổi và nêu lý do rõ ràng. Tránh mâu thuẫn (bảo cả thích lẫn không thích pizza) và lỗi cấu trúc như “in fruit.” Nên dùng từ vựng chính xác (salad, rice, tomatoes, fruit) và liên từ để giải thích (because, so).

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to prefer pizza, but now I prefer healthier options such as salads, rice with vegetables and fruit because I care more about my health.

× 'My favorite My favorite food is pizza.'

✓ 'My favorite food is pizza.'

'The sentence repeated "My favorite" and is otherwise correct. Remove the duplicate to make it grammatically correct and concise.'

× 'I eat.'

✓ 'I eat pizza.'

'Originally the fragment "I eat." lacks an object and context. Adding the object "pizza" completes the thought and matches the question about favourite food.'

× 'I ate pizza when I was 8 years old.'

✓ 'I ate pizza when I was eight years old.'

'Use of past tense "ate" is correct, but write numbers under ten in words for formal speech: "eight" instead of "8".'

× 'My aunt bought me pizza a pizza in a fast food store and I love it.'

✓ 'My aunt bought me a pizza at a fast-food restaurant and I loved it.'

'There was a duplicated phrase "pizza a pizza" and wrong preposition "in" for places. Use "a pizza" (singular) and "at a fast-food restaurant." Also the feeling refers to a past event so use past tense "loved."'

× 'When I was young, I like pizza, always pizza, because I the first time I ate it and I feel so lovely and so fascinating about it, and now I'm still liked it.'

✓ 'When I was young, I liked pizza, always pizza, because the first time I ate it I felt very happy and fascinated by it, and now I still like it.'

'The sentence mixes tenses. For past time reference use past tense "liked" and "felt." Use "the first time" (include "the") and "fascinated by it" is the correct prepositional phrase. Change "I'm still liked it" to "I still like it."'

× 'Yes I do in the winter on 20/24 I usually ate fish and noodles but in now I usually ate healthy food because I'm lost weight.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. In winter I usually eat fish and noodles, but now I usually eat healthy food because I have lost weight.'

'Use present simple "I usually eat" for habits. Remove unclear date "on 20/24." Replace past "ate" with present "eat" when describing habitual actions. For result of weight change use present perfect "I have lost weight."'

× 'Yes, as I say early I like pizza, but now I don't like pizza so much.'

✓ 'Yes, as I said earlier, I liked pizza, but now I don't like pizza so much.'

'Mix of tenses and wording: use past "said earlier" and past "liked" for childhood preference. "Don't like" correctly expresses current preference. Use "earlier" instead of "early."'

× 'I like healthy food like salad or rice and tomatoes in fruit.'

✓ 'I like healthy foods such as salads, rice, tomatoes, and fruit.'

'Use plural forms for general categories (foods, salads). "Such as" is better than "like" to introduce examples. "Tomatoes and fruit" are separate items; "in fruit" is incorrect.'

× 'Then fast food like pizza because I see it healthy.'

✓ 'I avoid fast food like pizza because I don't consider it healthy.'

'The original used incorrect structure "I see it healthy." Use "consider it healthy" or "think it is healthy." Here the intended meaning is avoidance, so "avoid" plus negative is clearer. Also add polarity to match meaning.'