食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (um, uh), and combine related details with linking words. Mention one or two specific reasons (taste, health) and a brief example or memory to enrich the response.

範例: My favourite food is scrambled eggs with roasted broccoli and a dash of lemon. I prefer it because it tastes fresh and is very nutritious, especially since I avoid oils and sauces. It’s a family recipe from my grandmother, and I’ve enjoyed it since childhood, so it also has sentimental value.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific examples and a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases and finish sentences fully. Mention particular meals or snacks you ate for energy to make the answer concrete.

範例: When I was young, I liked energy-rich, home-cooked meals because I was active in sports. For example, I often ate porridge for breakfast and rice with lentils and vegetables after training, so I wasn’t a picky eater and usually ate whatever my grandmother prepared.

建議: Clarify vocabulary and correct mistakes (e.g., 'diverse' seasons, not 'divorce'). Use a full, coherent sentence with linking words and complete the example. Give specific seasonal foods and explain why you choose them (temperature, availability).

範例: Yes, we eat different foods in different seasons. For example, during summer we eat lots of mangoes and drink various smoothies and juices to stay hydrated, whereas in winter we prefer warming soups and stews that are seasonal and comforting.

建議: Respond directly and clearly: state whether it changed, then give two specific reasons (health awareness, ingredients) using linking words. Avoid fillers and unclear words ('moot', 'never had to hard'). Provide brief examples of changes in choice or preparation.

範例: My favourite food hasn’t really changed, but I am more careful about ingredients now. For instance, I avoid processed foods with stabilizers and prefer protein-rich meals and more vegetables, such as grilled chicken with steamed greens instead of greasy fast food.

× My favorite food is scrambled eggs with roasted broccoli and dash of lemon.

✓ My favorite food is scrambled eggs with roasted broccoli and a dash of lemon.

Missing article 'a' before 'dash' (countable noun phrase). Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct and natural.

× Moreover, I don't add any kind of oil and uh, sauce in this.

✓ Moreover, I don't add any oil or sauce to it.

Use of 'any kind of' is awkward here and 'in this' is incorrect; 'in this' should be 'to it' referring to the dish. Also use 'any oil or sauce' for parallel structure.

× This is my grandmother's recipe and I enjoyed it since my childhood.

✓ This is my grandmother's recipe and I have enjoyed it since my childhood.

Tense error: 'since my childhood' requires present perfect 'have enjoyed' to show an action continuing to the present.

× It is nutritious.

✓ It is nutritious.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Being a sports person I enjoyed almost all kind of home prepared meal as well as all the dishes and snacks that provide me enough energy as well as a good taste.

✓ Being a sports person, I enjoyed almost all kinds of home-prepared meals as well as dishes and snacks that provided me with enough energy and good taste.

Pluralization: 'kinds' and 'meals' should be plural. Compound adjectives require hyphen in 'home-prepared'. Verb tense consistency: past tense 'enjoyed' and 'provided'. Added 'with' after 'provided' for correct collocation.

× So I was not that choosy or a picky eater.

✓ So I was not that choosy or picky a eater.

Better phrasing: use either 'not that choosy or picky' or 'not a choosy or picky eater'. Original 'a picky eater' after 'not that' is awkward; simplified version maintains meaning. (Alternatively: 'So I was not that choosy or a picky eater.' Either is acceptable.)

× Whatever my grandmother offered me in those days, I used to.

✓ Whatever my grandmother offered me in those days, I used to eat.

Sentence lacks a verb at the end: 'used to' requires a base verb (e.g., 'eat') to complete the meaning.

× Yes, we have many divorce season, so we enjoyed many kinds of food in particular weather condition.

✓ Yes, we have many diverse seasons, so we enjoy different kinds of food in particular weather conditions.

'Divorce season' is incorrect word choice; likely 'diverse seasons'. Also correct plural agreement ('seasons', 'conditions') and maintain present tense if referring generally: 'enjoy' instead of 'enjoyed'.

× For example, during the summer days we keep ourself hydrated with mangoes and rocks of different kind of smoothies as well as juice and during the.

✓ For example, during the summer we keep ourselves hydrated with mangoes and various kinds of smoothies as well as juice.

Pronoun reflexive 'ourself' should be 'ourselves'. 'rocks of different kind' is incorrect; use 'various kinds of smoothies'. Removed trailing incomplete 'and during the.' Also 'summer days' better as 'summer' and plural agreement 'kinds'.

× Not really, but I became more conscious about ingredient as well as uh, the added uh, stabilizer which I was moot during my childhood day.

✓ Not really, but I became more conscious about ingredients as well as the added stabilizers, which I was not concerned about during my childhood days.

Pluralize 'ingredient' and 'stabilizer'. The phrase 'which I was moot' is incorrect; use 'which I was not concerned about'. Also 'childhood day' should be 'childhood days'.

× Umm, because I was a sports person, always preferred to have protein rich food as well as lots of uh, vegetable.

✓ Umm, because I was a sportsperson, I always preferred to have protein-rich food as well as lots of vegetables.

Use 'sportsperson' as one word. Add subject 'I' before 'always preferred' for clarity. Hyphenate 'protein-rich' and pluralize 'vegetables'.

× My parents never had to hard.

✓ My parents never had to work too hard.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. Likely intended meaning: 'My parents never had to work too hard.' Added verb 'work' and corrected 'to hard' to 'too hard' for degree adverb.