食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng về chủ đề, ngữ pháp và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ “it's isn't”), rút gọn câu thừa và dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý. Thêm cụ thể vì sao bạn thích (mùi vị, kết cấu, kỷ niệm) và giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: My favourite food is fried chicken because I love its crispy skin and juicy meat. Although I know it’s not very healthy, I enjoy it as an occasional treat. For example, I often eat it with friends at weekend gatherings.

建議: Trả lời lặp ý và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp/diễn đạt (ví dụ “I cannot imagine a lie”). Cần trả lời trực tiếp sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể về quá khứ (kỷ niệm, thói quen). Dùng cấu trúc thì quá khứ đơn nếu nói về thói quen trước đây.

範例: When I was young, I always loved fried chicken because my family often ordered it for special occasions. I remember running to the table for the crispy pieces, so it became my favourite treat.

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ nghĩa, có nhiều lỗi cấu trúc và từ vựng không phù hợp. Trả lời cần trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể về mùa, lễ hội hoặc thời tiết ảnh hưởng đến thực phẩm. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh.

範例: Not really. I usually eat similar foods year-round, but in winter I prefer soups and stews because they are warming. For example, I often make chicken soup when it’s cold.

建議: Ý định tốt nhưng diễn đạt kém rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp (Yes/No) và nêu rõ thay đổi cùng lý do (sức khỏe, thói quen). Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về thực phẩm bạn ăn bây giờ so với trước đây.

範例: Yes, it has changed. I used to prefer fried chicken as a child, but now I am more health-conscious so I choose grilled chicken and salads more often. For instance, I usually eat a vegetable salad with grilled fish for lunch.

× Honestly, I like junk food, especially fried chicken, although it's isn't good for our health, is also delicious. Therefore I cannot resist it.

✓ Honestly, I like junk food, especially fried chicken. Although it isn't good for our health, it is also delicious; therefore I cannot resist it.

The sentence contains an incorrect contraction 'it's isn't' (redundant auxiliary) and a missing subject for the second clause. Use a single correct contraction 'isn't' and supply the subject 'it' for clarity. Also split into two sentences or use proper punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: Avoid double auxiliaries and ensure each clause has a clear subject.

× It's absolutely fried chicken. I cannot imagine a lie when I don't eat any more chicken fry because it's so tasty and irresp IR irresistible.

✓ It was absolutely fried chicken. I couldn't imagine my life without fried chicken because it's so tasty and irresistible.

The question asked about childhood preferences, so past tense should be used; 'It's' should be 'It was'. 'I cannot imagine a lie' is incorrect phraseology — likely intended 'I couldn't imagine my life'. 'chicken fry' is incorrect noun order; use 'fried chicken'. Use 'couldn't' to match past reference and correct vocabulary 'irresistible'.

× Not really for me every food has their own delicious 1 so sometimes when I raise something I will fight it to it.

✓ Not really; for me, every food has its own deliciousness, so sometimes when I crave something I will try to find it.

There is a subject-pronoun agreement error: 'every food' is singular, so use the singular possessive 'its' not 'their'. 'delicious 1' is invalid; use 'deliciousness' or 'a delicious taste'. 'raise something' and 'fight it to it' are incorrect verbs for the intended meaning; likely 'crave' and 'try to find' or 'try to eat' are appropriate. Ensure verbs fit the intended action.

× Ask the road I have a conscious about my healthy and my health. So done I try to eat some healthy food, especially food has.

✓ Over the years I have become conscious about my health. So now I try to eat some healthy food, especially foods that are nutritious.

The original has incorrect phrases: 'Ask the road' likely intended 'Over the years' or 'As I grew older'; 'a conscious about my healthy and my health' is ungrammatical — correct is 'become conscious about my health'. 'So done I try' should be 'So now I try'. 'food has' is incomplete; use 'foods that are nutritious' or 'healthy foods'. Rearrange into clear, grammatically correct sentences and maintain present tense for current habits.