食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify the food name, use a complete sentence, and avoid hesitations. Give a short reason or detail to expand the answer within 1–2 supporting sentences. Use linking words if you add details.

範例: My favourite food is pizza. I love pizza because it’s versatile — I often choose vegetable toppings for a light meal, and I enjoy sharing it with friends on weekends.

建議: Use past tense to match the question about childhood, keep the answer natural and add one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Reduce repetition and avoid unnecessary phrases.

範例: When I was young, I liked drinking milk because it helped me grow taller. Also, it made me feel full at night, so I usually slept better after a glass of warm milk.

建議: Remove filler words and make the reason concise. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct grammar (e.g., help me feel cooler). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer sushi and cold noodles because they are refreshing and help me feel cooler in hot weather.

建議: Speak in full sentences, use past and present tenses correctly, and give a clear reason for the change. Avoid hesitations and finish your thought. Use a linking phrase such as "however" or "but" to contrast past and present preferences.

範例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I didn’t like spicy food, but now I enjoy spicy dishes because I developed a taste for bold flavours after trying them with friends.

× My favorite food is. Pisa.

✓ My favorite food is pizza.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a typo. It has an unnecessary period after 'is' which breaks the sentence structure and 'Pisa' is a misspelling of 'pizza'. Correcting the punctuation and spelling produces a complete declarative sentence that answers the question. Suggestion: remove the stray period and use the correct noun 'pizza'.

× I like to drink milk because it can help me grow taller and I can sleep well.

✓ I liked to drink milk when I was young because it helped me grow taller and sleep well.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were young), so the response should be in the past tense. The original uses present simple ('I like', 'can help', 'can sleep'), which is inconsistent with the question. Change verbs to past tense ('liked', 'helped') and simplify 'can sleep well' to 'sleep well'. Suggestion: match the tense to the time frame in the question.

× Of course, uh, for example, in summer I like to eat sushi or cold noodles, so I won't be, so it can make me umm, get more cooler.

✓ Of course. For example, in summer I like to eat sushi or cold noodles because they help me feel cooler.

Multiple issues: awkward punctuation and filler words, incorrect use of 'won't be' and 'get more cooler' (double comparative). The clause should express cause: eating cold food helps one feel cooler. Use 'they help me feel cooler' rather than 'get more cooler' (avoid double comparatives like 'more cooler'). Also change 'so' to 'because' for clear cause-effect. Suggestion: remove fillers, correct comparative to 'cooler', and use plural pronoun 'they' for 'sushi or cold noodles'.

× Yes, uh, for example. I. Like to eat spicy food? Now but when I child when I'm child I don't like spicy because it.

✓ Yes. For example, I like to eat spicy food now, but when I was a child I didn't like spicy food because it was too strong for me.

The original has fragmented sentences, wrong tense and missing words. The question asks about change since childhood, so contrast present and past: 'I like' (present) vs 'when I was a child' (past). Use past tense 'didn't like' and complete the reason with 'it was too strong for me' or similar. Also remove stray punctuation and filler words. Suggestion: combine fragments into a clear contrast sentence, use 'was' for 'when I was a child' and 'didn't like' for past dislike.