食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ・冒頭で直接質問に答えた後、文法を正し簡潔に述べること。 ・冗長な表現を避け、名詞の単複や冠詞を正しく使うこと（例: "kiwi" または "kiwifruit","is" の代わりに複数形なら "are"）。 ・詳細を加える際は具体的な理由や例を一つか二つ挙げ、接続詞（because, so, also）を使ってつなげること。 ・発言は最大5文に収め、自然で流れるような語順を意識すること。

範例: My favourite food is kiwifruit. I like them because they taste sweet and refreshing. Also, they are very healthy since they are rich in vitamin C and fiber. For example, I often eat one after lunch to boost my energy.

建議: ・過去のことを話す際は過去形を使うこと（例: "liked", "went", "ate"）。 ・具体的な経験を短く説明し、接続詞（when, because, so）でつなげると自然になる。 ・不必要な語句や固有名詞の羅列を避け、簡潔に記述する。 ・文の語順と動詞の形を確認して、5文以内に収めること。

範例: When I was young, I liked eating fast food such as hamburgers and fries. I often went to McDonald's with my father on weekends. We usually shared a big fries and a hamburger, which felt like a treat. Because of that, I still enjoy a burger occasionally.

建議: ・質問にはまず直球で答え（Yes/No）てから具体例を述べること。 ・不自然な語や誤った語（"Very pottery"など）を使わない。代わりに簡潔な副詞や表現を使う。 ・季節ごとの具体的な料理の説明を簡潔にし、接続詞（for example, in summer, while）が役立つ。 ・繰り返しを避け、文法を正しく（単複、代名詞）使うこと。

範例: Yes, I do. For example, I usually eat more ice cream and chilled foods in summer because I like to cool down. In winter, I prefer hot dishes like nabe, which is warm and comforting. However, I try to eat kiwifruit regularly because I enjoy them and they are healthy.

建議: ・まず直接に質問に答え（Yes/No）てから理由を述べる。理由は過去から現在への比較を明確にする。 ・不自然な表現（"rubbed fruits"）を避け、正しい動詞やフレーズ（"liked", "eaten"）を使う。 ・具体的な例や頻度を述べる際は接続詞を使い、文章の流れを良くする。 ・冗長な否定表現を避け、簡潔にまとめること。

範例: No, it hasn't changed; I have liked fruits since I was a child. I especially enjoyed kiwifruit, oranges, strawberries and apples when I was young, and I still eat them regularly. Even when I'm not hungry, I often choose fruit because it's light and easy to eat.

× I like the cute fruits the best of all foods.

✓ I like cute fruits the best of all foods.

'Cute' modifies 'fruits' and does not need the definite article 'the' before it; removing 'the' makes the phrase natural. Also 'cute fruits' is acceptable as a general preference. Suggestion: say 'I like fruits the best' or 'I like cute fruits the most.'

× Kiwi fruits is.

✓ Kiwifruits are.

The subject 'Kiwi fruits' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are.' Alternatively use the singular 'A kiwifruit is' or 'Kiwis are.'

× Not only delicious but also good for our health.

✓ They are not only delicious but also good for our health.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'They are' creates a complete comparative structure 'not only... but also.' Suggestion: always include the subject and linking verb when making such statements.

× It includes vitamin.

✓ They contain vitamins.

'It' is singular while referring to plural 'fruits'; 'vitamin' as a count noun needs plural 'vitamins' or a determiner. Use 'They contain vitamins' or 'They contain vitamin C.'

× I like junk food such as McDonald's, Burger King, and Kentucky Fried Chicken.

✓ I liked junk food such as McDonald's, Burger King, and Kentucky Fried Chicken when I was young.

The examiner asked about past preference; the response should be in past tense 'liked' to match the question. Keep examples as proper nouns.

× I often went to shop to eating hamburger and fried French fries with my father.

✓ I often went to the shop to eat hamburgers and French fries with my father.

Use 'went to the shop' with the definite article and 'to eat' (base form) after 'to' for purpose. 'Hamburger' should be plural 'hamburgers' and 'French fries' is the natural term. Also remove redundant 'fried.'

× It was.

✓ It was fun.

'It was' is a fragment; add an adjective or clause to complete the sentence, e.g., 'It was fun' or 'It was a good time.' Use a descriptive word matching context.

× Very pottery, yes, but not completely.

✓ Yes, very much, but not completely.

'Very pottery' is meaningless; replace with 'Yes, very much' to show degree. Maintain clear adverbial phrase ordering.

× I want to eat ice cream in summer, but I want to eat nabe in winter.

✓ I want to eat ice cream in summer, but I want to eat nabe in winter.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense expressing habitual seasonal desires, so no change needed. Keep 'nabe' if the examiner understands the term.

× However, I want to eat Kiwi fruits every time, every day.

✓ However, I want to eat kiwifruits anytime, every day.

'Every time' is awkward here; 'anytime' or 'all the time' is more natural. Also 'Kiwi fruits' is better written 'kiwifruits' or 'kiwis' and consistency in plurality helps. Suggestion: 'I want to eat kiwis every day.'

× It is very good.

✓ They are very good.

If referring to kiwifruits (plural), use plural pronoun and verb 'They are.' If referring to the idea, keep singular. Ensure pronoun agrees with noun number.

× No, I have rubbed fruits such as Kiwi fruits, orange, strawberry and apples.

✓ No, I have liked fruits such as kiwifruit, oranges, strawberries and apples.

'Have rubbed' is incorrect verb choice; the intended meaning is preference 'have liked.' Also use consistent pluralization and correct forms: 'kiwifruit' or 'kiwis', 'oranges', 'strawberries', 'apples.' Present perfect 'have liked' is acceptable to indicate continued preference.

× I'm tired and I don't want to have to eat something, but I can eat only fruits.

✓ When I'm tired and don't want to eat much, I can only eat fruits.

Original is awkward: 'have to eat something' conflicts with 'don't want.' Rephrase to 'don't want to eat much' or 'don't feel like eating anything' and place 'only' before 'eat fruits' or after 'can' for natural word order. Suggestion: 'When I'm tired and don't feel like eating, I only eat fruits.'