食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (ví dụ: dùng thì và động từ phù hợp), phát âm rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn. Nên tách thành câu chủ đề ngắn rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại lẩu, thành phần hoặc kỷ niệm gia đình). Tránh dùng từ lặp và tiếng ngập (uh).

範例: My favourite food is hot pot because it combines many flavours such as sour, sweet and salty. I especially enjoy seafood hot pot, which I usually eat when my family gathers on weekends. It tastes comforting and brings back happy memories.

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (I were → I was, I like → I liked, it's makes → it makes), tránh tiếng ngập và dùng linking word đơn giản để rõ ràng hơn. Nên nêu một hoặc hai lí do cụ thể và một ví dụ nhớ được. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: When I was young, I liked sweets, especially candy, because they tasted very different from the savory meals my parents cooked. For example, I remember saving pocket money to buy colourful lollipops that made me feel happy.

建議: Giữ câu ngắn gọn và dùng linking words như 'in summer'/'in winter' hoặc 'whereas'. Tránh tiếng ngập, sửa cấu trúc (I will → I usually, make → makes, I rather → I prefer). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ món mùa hè/đông yêu thích).

範例: Yes. In summer I usually eat light foods that make me feel cool, such as salads and drink lemonade. In winter, however, I prefer hot dishes like noodle soup because they warm me up.

建議: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (since I were a child → since I was a child), loại bỏ lặp từ, và phát triển ý bằng cách nêu lí do thay đổi khẩu vị (ví dụ: quan tâm sức khỏe). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về món hiện tại và vì sao.

範例: Yes. When I was a child my favourite foods were candies and sweets, but now I prefer healthier options. For example, I often choose a mixed salad or a vegetable soup because I want to eat more nutritious meals.

× My favorite food is hot pot 'cause it's mixed with a lot of flavor like sour, sweet or salty and I usually taste it when my family gathered.

✓ My favorite food is hot pot because it has a lot of flavors like sour, sweet, and salty, and I usually taste it when my family gathers.

The sentence uses present context so verbs should be in present simple. 'it's mixed with' is passive and awkward; 'it has a lot of flavors' is clearer. Use plural 'flavors' for multiple types (singular/plural issue) and 'gathers' for third person singular present. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause.' Suggestions: use present simple consistently, pluralize countable nouns, and use correct verb forms for third-person subjects.

× When I were young, I like sweets because, uh, it tastes very different from the food that I forced to eat.

✓ When I was young, I liked sweets because they tasted very different from the food that I was forced to eat.

Time reference is past, so verbs should be past tense. 'were' should be 'was' (subject-verb agreement with I in past), 'like' → 'liked', 'it tastes' → 'they tasted' to match plural 'sweets', and passive 'I forced to eat' needs auxiliary 'was forced to eat.' Suggestions: match verb tense to time adverbials and ensure subject number matches verb forms.

× I love candies because it's makes me feel very enjoyed and happy.

✓ I love candy because it makes me feel very happy and pleased.

'Candies' is acceptable but 'candy' is more natural as an uncountable noun for the category. 'it's makes' is incorrect: choose 'it makes' (no contraction with extra s). 'feel very enjoyed' is wrong; 'enjoyed' is a past-participial adjective and unnatural here. Use 'feel happy' or 'feel pleased.' Suggestions: use correct subject-verb form and appropriate adjectives instead of past participles for feelings.

× Of course, like for summer I will eat uh, food that make me feel cooler like uh, lemonade or some bright some light food like cereal.

✓ Of course. In summer I eat foods that make me feel cooler, like lemonade or light foods such as cereal.

Talking about habitual actions uses present simple, not 'will.' Use plural 'foods' when speaking generally and 'make' should be 'make' agreeing with plural 'foods'. 'some bright some light' is ungrammatical; use 'light foods such as.' Suggestions: use present simple for routines, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose clear adjectives.

× But in winter I rather soup or umm noodles that make me feel hotter.

✓ But in winter I prefer soup or noodles that make me feel warmer.

'rather' is incorrect here; use 'prefer.' 'make me feel hotter' is acceptable but 'warmer' is a better collocation. Maintain present simple 'prefer' for habitual preference. Suggestions: use correct verbs for preferences and appropriate comparative adjectives.

× Yes uh my favorite re food since I were a child was candies and sweets but now when I am a teenager I prefer healthier food like a salad like salad or soup or some.

✓ When I was a child, my favorite foods were candies and sweets, but now that I am a teenager I prefer healthier foods like salad or soup.

Use past tense 'was'/'were' for childhood. 'I were' incorrect -> 'I was.' 'favorite re food' seems typo; corrected to 'favorite foods.' Match plural nouns with plural verbs: 'foods were.' Use present simple 'prefer' for current habit. Remove redundancy 'like a salad like salad or some.' Suggestions: clean typos, match tenses to time references, use plural forms consistently, and avoid repetition.