食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and unfinished sentences. Also provide a concrete example with a complete sentence.

範例: My favourite food is desserts. I enjoy different desserts because varied textures and flavors cheer me up; for example, I love creamy cheesecake for its smoothness and crunchy caramel for the contrast in texture.

建議: Use accurate grammar and finish your thought. Begin with a direct statement about what you liked, then explain why with linking words (because, since) and a complete reason. Replace informal words like '’cause' with 'because'.

範例: When I was young, I loved all kinds of ice cream, such as ice pops and gelato. Because Taiwan is often hot, eating cold ice cream was a refreshing way to cool down after playing outside.

建議: Good structure and clear examples. Improve by using linking words to connect ideas and add a brief explanation of why those choices suit the seasons. Also correct small phrasing issues (e.g., 'different seasons' not 'different season').

範例: Yes, we eat different foods in different seasons. For example, in winter we often eat hot pot because it warms you up, whereas in summer we prefer cold noodles and seasonal fruits to stay cool.

建議: Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Start with a direct answer about whether your preference has changed, then give reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'stick to the same kind of food all over the time'.

範例: My favourite food hasn't changed much since childhood; I still prefer desserts and ice cream because they feel refreshing and boost my mood after a long day.

× Having this, having a variety of dessert can cheer me up and I like to taste the difference between the texture.

✓ Having a variety of desserts can cheer me up and I like to taste the differences in texture.

Use plural 'desserts' with 'a variety of' (quantifier requires plural noun). Also 'differences in texture' is the natural collocation; 'between' suggests two items, while 'differences in' covers multiple textures. Suggestion: use 'a variety of desserts' and 'differences in texture' to be natural and grammatically correct.

× For example, I have one experience that is the.

✓ For example, I had one experience like that.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses present 'have' incorrectly for a past event. Use past tense 'had' and rephrase 'like that' to complete the idea. Suggestion: complete the clause and use past tense for a past experience.

× I came on any types of ice cream when I was little, including the ice pop ice cream or the Gelato.

✓ I tried many types of ice cream when I was little, including ice pops and gelato.

'Came on' is incorrect; 'tried' or 'ate' is appropriate. 'Many types of' is the correct quantifier. Use plural 'ice pops' and lowercase 'gelato'. Suggestion: use 'tried many types of ice cream' and list items in plural form.

× I love them 'cause it's often hot in Taiwan and.

✓ I love them because it was often hot in Taiwan.

The original mixes pronouns and unfinished clause. Use 'it' for weather and past tense 'was' to match 'when I was little'. Also avoid colloquial ''cause' in formal speech and complete the sentence. Suggestion: say 'I loved them because it was often hot in Taiwan.' if speaking about childhood.

× Yes, we have different fruits during the different season of the year.

✓ Yes, we have different fruits during the different seasons of the year.

Use plural 'seasons' when referring to multiple parts of the year. 'Different season' was singular which contradicts 'different'. Suggestion: use 'seasons' to match plural meaning.

× Like we can have hot pot in winter and maybe cool noodles in summer.

✓ For example, we can have hot pot in winter and maybe cold noodles in summer.

'Like' is informal; 'for example' is clearer. 'Cool noodles' is awkward — 'cold noodles' is the standard description. No article is needed before uncountable dishes. Suggestion: use 'cold noodles' and 'for example' for clarity.

× I think I will stick to the same kind of food all over the time, including the different kind of desserts and the ice cream because they are still refreshing and giving me more energy after having them.

✓ I think I will stick to the same kinds of food all the time, including different kinds of desserts and ice cream, because they are still refreshing and give me more energy after I eat them.

Use plural 'kinds' to match 'different'. 'All over the time' is incorrect; use 'all the time'. 'Different kind of desserts' needs plural forms. 'Giving me' should be 'give me' to match present simple after 'they are still refreshing'. Use 'after I eat them' for clarity. Suggestion: adjust plurals and verb forms for agreement and natural phrasing.