食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations, fix verb forms and redundancy, and add one specific detail (type or reason). Use a linking phrase if expanding. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: My favourite food is sushi. I enjoy many kinds of sushi, especially salmon nigiri and tuna rolls, because they taste fresh and are light when I eat out with friends.

建議: Correct tense and clarity: use past simple, remove unclear phrases, and give a specific dish name and brief reason. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to explain why.

範例: When I was young, I loved homemade pasta. My mother cooked it for me almost every day because it was simple and comforting, and I could eat it all day.

建議: Good idea but improve word choice and grammar. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g. diet, seasonal) and one linking word to contrast. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of fruits or dishes.

範例: My diet is not strongly seasonal, although I do change a bit. For example, in summer I eat more fresh fruits like watermelon and peaches because they are refreshing, whereas in winter I prefer warm soups.

建議: Answer is clear—make it more natural by replacing 'nutrition' with 'diet' and giving a brief reason and one example of a change. Use a linking phrase like 'however' to contrast past and present.

範例: Yes, my diet has changed a lot. As a child I used to drink sugary tea and eat many sweets; however, now I try to avoid junk food and choose healthier snacks like nuts and fruit.

× I like all kind of sushi and whenever I hang out with my friends or eating outside alone I try to try variety of types of sushi.

✓ I like all kinds of sushi, and whenever I hang out with my friends or eat outside alone, I try to try a variety of types of sushi.

The noun 'kind' should be plural ('kinds') when referring to multiple types. The verb form after 'or' must match the parallel structure: 'hang out' pairs with 'eat' (not 'eating'). Also add the article 'a' before 'variety' and commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for multiple items, keep parallel verb forms, and include articles where needed.

× As a child I prefer it backward to be honest it was my favorite 1 and I could eat entire day I think and my mom used to cook it to me every day.

✓ As a child I preferred it; to be honest, it was my favorite and I could eat it all day, and my mom used to cook it for me every day.

When talking about childhood (past), use past tense 'preferred' instead of present 'prefer'. 'Could eat entire day' needs 'it' and the expression 'all day'. 'Cook it to me' is incorrect preposition; use 'cook it for me'. Add punctuation and 'to be honest' set off by commas. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently when describing past habits and use correct prepositions ('for' someone).

× I like it taste and how it is simple was for my Organism.

✓ I liked its taste and how simple it was for my body.

Use 'liked' for past preference. 'It taste' is incorrect; use possessive adjective 'its taste'. 'How it is simple' should be 'how simple it was' in past. 'Organism' is not natural in this context; use 'body'. Suggestion: use possessives for things' characteristics, match tense, and choose natural nouns ('body').

× I think my nutrition is not dependent on season.

✓ I think my nutrition is not dependent on the season.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'season' when speaking generally about a particular concept. Suggestion: include articles with singular nouns referring to a general category when needed.

× I can eat the same thing in the winter and in the summer, but in the summer I prefer to eat more fruit because it feels more simple.

✓ I can eat the same thing in winter and summer, but in summer I prefer to eat more fruit because it feels lighter.

Omit 'the' for seasons when speaking generally ('in winter', 'in summer') or be consistent. 'Feels more simple' is awkward; use 'feels lighter' or 'simpler' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use natural collocations for seasons and choose adjectives that convey intended meaning ('lighter' for food).

× As a child I always preferred tea with sugar and a lot of sweets, but now I try to look after my diet and avoid sweet and junky foods.

✓ As a child I always preferred tea with sugar and a lot of sweets, but now I try to look after my diet and avoid sweet and junk food.

Use 'junk food' rather than 'junky foods' for the common noun. 'Sweet' as an adjective is fine; pair it with 'food' or use 'sweets'. Suggestion: use standard collocations ('junk food') and maintain consistency in noun forms.