食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, grammatically correct, and complete ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and avoid fragments. Add one or two linked supporting details (reason and an example). Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

範例: My favourite foods are sweet treats, especially strawberries, strawberry cake and ice cream. I enjoy baking at home because it lets me experiment with new flavours; for example, last week I made a strawberry cheesecake with lemon zest.

建議: Provide a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and word choice, avoid repetition, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Be specific about feelings and memories.

範例: When I was young, I loved fast food because my mother rarely allowed it. Therefore, I was always excited when we passed a fast-food restaurant and longed to try a burger and fries.

建議: Answer directly, fix grammar (verb forms and pronouns), and use clear linking words like “for example” or “in summer” to show contrast. Be specific about seasonal dishes and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year because my mother cooks seasonal dishes. For example, we eat fresh lime salad and fruits in summer, while in winter she makes a warming vegetable soup.

建議: Give a direct, concise answer and correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler words and repetition. Explain briefly why your preference stayed the same or changed, using one linking word like “because” or “but.”

範例: No, my favourite food has not changed; I still enjoy fast food because I like the taste. However, I try not to eat it too often for health reasons, although I sometimes crave a burger and fries.

× 'My favorite food are sweet treats, especially strawberries, strawberry cake and ice cream.'

✓ 'My favorite food is sweet treats, especially strawberries, strawberry cake, and ice cream.'

'Food' as a singular noun requires the singular verb 'is'. Also add a comma before the final item in a list for clarity. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement: "My favorite food is..." and separate list items with commas.'

× 'I also enjoy making dessert at home because baking will let me and I get to experience with a new flavour such as the.'

✓ 'I also enjoy making desserts at home because baking lets me try new flavors.'

'Enjoy' should be followed by a gerund: "making desserts" (plural fits better). The clause "baking will let me and I get to experience with a new flavour" is ungrammatical: use present simple 'lets' to state general truth and follow with verb 'try' rather than 'experience with'. Remove the trailing 'such as the' which is incomplete. Suggestion: simplify to clear subject + verb + object structure.'

× 'When I was a child, my favorite first was fast food because my mom rarely allowed me to eat it so I always want to try a burger and fries and I remember feeling exciting every time we passed the fast food restaurant and hoping we cruise.'

✓ 'When I was a child, my favorite food was fast food because my mom rarely allowed me to eat it, so I always wanted to try a burger and fries. I remember feeling excited every time we passed a fast food restaurant and hoping we could go in.'

'Was' is correct for past state; replace present 'want' with past 'wanted' to match the past time frame. 'Favorite first' is incorrect; use 'favorite food'. Use adjective 'excited' not 'exciting' to describe feelings. "Hoping we cruise" is incorrect — use 'hoping we could go in' or 'hoping we could stop'. Also add commas to join clauses. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for childhood memories and choose correct adjectives.'

× 'Yes, I often it's different food at different times for the years because my mother always cook a seasonal dish when I was chilled.'

✓ 'Yes, I often eat different foods at different times of the year because my mother always cooks seasonal dishes when I was a child.'

'It's different food' is incorrect; use 'eat different foods'. 'For the years' should be 'of the year' or 'of the year' — corrected to 'of the year'. For present habitual action, use present simple 'eat' and 'cooks'. 'Cook' must be conjugated as 'cooks' to agree with 'my mother'. 'When I was chilled' is wrong: use 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms for present habits and correct noun phrases.'

× 'For example, we ate a lime fresh salad and fruit in summer, but in winter she made a warming soup.'

✓ 'For example, we ate a fresh lime salad and fruit in summer, but in winter she made a warming soup.'

'Lime fresh salad' has incorrect adjective order; use 'fresh lime salad'. The rest is fine and correctly uses past tense for past habits. Suggestion: place adjectives in natural order (opinion/size/age/shape/color/material/ purpose), here 'fresh' (quality) before 'lime'.'

× 'No, as I say umm my favorite food is fast food now I really like that.'

✓ 'No. As I said, my favorite food now is fast food; I really like it.'

'As I say' should be past 'As I said' if referring back; however if asserting now, rephrase to 'As I said' for reference. Add punctuation and use pronoun 'it' to refer to 'fast food'. Also place 'now' before 'is' or after phrase for clarity. Suggestion: use clear tense reference and proper pronouns.'

× 'Also I did not want too much to eat the fast food, but I sometimes I really want to eat a burger and Friars and the.'

✓ 'I also did not want to eat too much fast food, but sometimes I really wanted to eat a burger and fries.'

'Did not want' is past and should be followed by base verb 'to eat' — correct order is 'did not want to eat'. 'Too much' should modify 'eat' placement as 'eat too much'. Use 'fries' instead of 'Friars'. Maintain past tense 'wanted' to match 'did not want' and the child-time context. Remove trailing 'and the'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and correct word order for negation: 'did not want to eat too much'.'