食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors; use one clear topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'herbs' and 'fresh herb') and correct verb forms.

範例: My favourite food is Tom Yum Goong, a spicy Thai soup. I like it because the broth is hot and aromatic, with fresh lemongrass and shrimp, which gives it a bright, seafood flavour. Because it balances spice and sourness, I always enjoy it.

建議: Correct subject-verb agreement and be specific about reasons; use linking words to connect ideas. Keep responses within 3–4 clear sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'in that time'.

範例: When I was a child, I liked American dishes such as hamburgers and steaks. They were popular and convenient, so my parents often bought them from the supermarket. As a result, I ate them frequently as a family meal.

建議: Fix grammar and complete sentences; use linking words (for example, 'in summer' and 'in contrast') and provide specific examples and reasons. Avoid sentence fragments such as 'because it.'

範例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer cold items such as ice cream or a refreshing salad because they help me cool down. In contrast, in winter I often eat hot soups to stay warm.

建議: Organise answer with a clear topic sentence and two supporting details explaining past and present preferences. Correct phrasing (e.g., 'I preferred fried chicken') and avoid filler words. Give specific examples of current foods and reasons for the change.

範例: Yes, my preferences have changed a lot. As a child I preferred fried chicken, which is tasty but high in fat. Now I try to eat healthier foods, such as stir-fried vegetables and fresh fruits, because I care more about nutrition and long-term health.

× I am a big fan of Thai food and my favorite dish is Tom Yum goong so I love it because it's spicy and aromatic with herbs, fresh herb and seafood.

✓ I am a big fan of Thai food and my favorite dish is Tom Yum goong, so I love it because it's spicy and aromatic with fresh herbs and seafood.

The phrase 'herbs, fresh herb and seafood' repeats 'herb' and misorders adjectives and nouns. Use 'fresh herbs' (plural) and place adjectives before nouns. Combine with correct punctuation: add a comma before 'so'. Improve parallelism by listing 'fresh herbs and seafood'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and ensure adjective-noun agreement (fresh herbs).

× I always enjoy when I eat it.

✓ I always enjoy eating it.

After 'enjoy' use the gerund (verb + -ing), not a clause 'when I eat it'. 'Enjoy eating it' is more natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + gerund to express liking an activity.

× When I was a child, my favorite food were American dishes like hamburger and steaks.

✓ When I was a child, my favorite foods were American dishes like hamburgers and steaks.

Mismatch between singular 'food' and plural verb 'were'. Use plural 'foods' to match 'were' and plural items. Also ensure item nouns are plural ('hamburgers'). Suggestion: make container noun and listed items agree in number.

× They were very famous and popular in that time because they were convenient and my parents often bought them at supermarket for our family.

✓ They were very popular at that time because they were convenient and my parents often bought them at the supermarket for our family.

'Famous and popular' is redundant; choose 'popular'. Use 'at that time' not 'in that time'. Include the article 'the' before 'supermarket'. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct prepositional phrases and articles.

× Yes, I usually eat different foods when the season change.

✓ Yes, I usually eat different foods when the seasons change.

Subject 'seasons' is plural, so verb should be 'change' matching plural; original had 'season change' missing plural. Use plural 'seasons' to indicate different times of year. Suggestion: ensure subject and number agree in time expressions.

× In summer I prefer a cold like ice cream or refreshing salad that made me cool down.

✓ In summer I prefer cold things like ice cream or refreshing salads that help me cool down.

'Prefer a cold' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer cold things' or 'prefer a cold dessert'. 'Refreshing salad' should be plural to match general preference. Use present tense 'help' not past 'made' because this is habitual. Suggestion: express habitual preferences with plural/general nouns and present tense verbs.

× Whereas in winter I always eat soup because it.

✓ In winter I always eat soup because it warms me up.

Sentence was incomplete ('because it.'). Provide a complete clause explaining why: 'because it warms me up.' Also avoid starting with 'Whereas' at sentence start without contrast structure; simpler 'In winter' is better. Suggestion: complete the causal clause and use appropriate linking words.

× Yes, I think it changed a lot.

✓ Yes, I think it has changed a lot.

The present perfect 'has changed' is appropriate to relate past change to the present. Using simple past 'changed' is possible but less natural when discussing change up to now. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe changes that affect the present.

× When I was young I preferred to it a umm chicken fry.

✓ When I was young I preferred fried chicken.

Original contains unnecessary particles ('to it a umm') and wrong word order. Use adjective 'fried' before 'chicken' to form the noun phrase. Suggestion: remove filler words and use correct adjective+noun order.

× Fried chicken often fry with high fat and calories.

✓ Fried chicken often contains high fat and calories.

'Fried chicken often fry' incorrectly uses verb form; 'fried chicken' is a noun phrase and should take 'contains' or 'is cooked with' not 'fry'. Also use 'has' or 'contains' for 'high fat and calories' and better phrasing 'high fat content and many calories.' Suggestion: use appropriate verb for noun phrases and more natural collocations ('contains high fat').

× Now I prefer healthy food like fried vegetable and some fruit such as.

✓ Now I prefer healthy foods like fried vegetables and some fruits.

'Food' should be plural 'foods' or use uncountable 'healthy food' with correct list: 'fried vegetables and some fruits.' 'Fried vegetable' must be plural. The phrase 'such as' was left incomplete; remove or complete with examples. Suggestion: ensure parallel plurality and complete lists.