食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сделайте ответ более естественным и структурированным: начните с прямого утверждения (тема), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины и пример. Избегайте неправильных слов (например, «baloneyism») и повторов («for for whole week»). Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и максимум 3–4 коротких предложений.

範例: My favourite food is spaghetti bolognese, especially when my mother cooks it. I love the rich tomato sauce and minced meat because it tastes hearty and comforting. For example, when she makes it, I often eat it several days in a row because it’s so delicious.

建議: Ответ уже понятен, но можно улучшить связность и конкретику: начните с короткого утверждения, затем добавьте причину и один конкретный пример или воспоминание. Избегайте разговорных сокращений (’cause). Используйте связки (because, for example, when) и не больше 3 предложений.

範例: When I was young, my favourite food was chicken with rice because it was simple and comforting. My grandmother often cooked it after school, and I remember enjoying it most on cold afternoons when she made a fragrant stew.

建議: Ответ непонятен и содержит ошибки: неверный вопрос («Is my mom a good cooker?») и неправильные выражения («the various of meals»). Дайте прямой ответ на вопрос (да/нет + краткое объяснение), добавьте 1–2 примера сезонных изменений, если актуально. Используйте связки (usually, in summer, during winter) и простые корректные фразы.

範例: Not really — I don’t change my diet much with the seasons. I usually try different dishes each week; for example, in summer I prefer salads and grilled vegetables, while in winter I enjoy warm stews and cabbage rolls.

建議: Ответ понятен, но формулировки можно улучшить: начните с простого «Yes» или «No», затем объясните причину изменения и добавьте одно конкретное сравнение. Избегайте разговорных усилителей («so hard») и повторов. Используйте связки (but, however, now) и 2–3 предложения.

範例: Yes. When I was a child I loved chicken and rice because it reminded me of my grandmother’s cooking, but now I prefer spaghetti bolognese for its rich flavours. I think my tastes changed as I tried more international dishes.

× My most preferred food is baloneyism when my mom cooked it for me.

✓ My most preferred food is bolognese when my mom cooks it for me.

The sentence uses incorrect word form 'baloneyism' and inconsistent tense. Replace with 'bolognese' (correct dish name) and use present tense 'cooks' to match 'is' and habitual action. Use 'when my mom cooks it for me' for clarity and grammaticality.

× The taste of spaghettis and meat is so delicious so I can eat it every day for for whole week I think.

✓ The taste of spaghetti and meat is so delicious that I could eat it every day for a whole week, I think.

Use 'spaghetti' as an uncountable plural form, not 'spaghettis'. Add 'that' to link clauses, change 'can' to 'could' for conditional/hypothetical tone, add article 'a' before 'whole week', and remove duplicate 'for'. Also add commas for readability.

× When I was young, my favorite food was chicken with rice.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was chicken with rice.

This sentence is grammatically correct; past tense 'was' correctly matches 'when I was young'. No change needed.

× For example, when it came from school, my grandma cooked for me and I enjoyed this meal 'cause my grandma was very good at cooking.

✓ For example, when I came home from school, my grandma cooked for me and I enjoyed the meal because she was very good at cooking.

'When it came from school' is incorrect; use 'when I came home from school'. Avoid informal ' ’cause' and repeat 'my grandma' unnecessarily; use 'she' for smoother flow. 'The meal' is clearer than 'this meal' in recounting past habits.

× Is my mom a good cooker? I'm trying to eat the various of meals every week, not in different times of the year.

✓ Is my mom a good cook? I'm trying to eat a variety of meals every week, not at different times of the year.

Use 'cook' (person) not 'cooker' (appliance). 'The various of meals' is incorrect; use 'a variety of meals'. Use preposition 'at' with 'different times of the year'.

× For example, for the first week we can eat spaghetti and for the second cabbage rolls.

✓ For example, in the first week we can eat spaghetti and in the second week we can have cabbage rolls.

Use 'in the first week' rather than 'for the first week' for time reference; repeat 'week' for clarity and add 'have' to indicate eating. Maintain consistent structure for both clauses.

× Is my mom a good cooker?

✓ Is my mom a good cook?

Replace 'cooker' with 'cook'. 'Cooker' is a device; 'cook' is the correct noun for a person. Present tense 'Is' is fine.

× I'm trying to eat the various of meals every week, not in different times of the year.

✓ I try to eat a variety of meals every week, not at different times of the year.

Use simple present 'I try' for habitual action rather than 'I'm trying' if stating routine. Replace 'the various of meals' with 'a variety of meals' and change preposition to 'at'.

× Yes, as I said, when I was a child I used to love rice with chicken so hard, but nowadays the most preferred food is bolognese.

✓ Yes, as I said, when I was a child I used to love chicken with rice very much, but nowadays my favourite food is bolognese.

'Used to love ... so hard' is unidiomatic; use 'very much'. Order 'chicken with rice' is more natural. 'Most preferred' is awkward; use 'my favourite food' or 'my preferred food'. Maintain present tense 'is' for current preference.

× So the meal change since I was a child.

✓ So my preference has changed since I was a child.

'The meal change' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'has changed' to link past to present. 'My preference' clarifies what changed rather than 'the meal'.