食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap net bir konu cümlesi içeriyor ancak dil bilgisi hataları, tekrarlar ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. Cümleleri daha doğru gramerle kurun (ör. 'they are quick and easy to make'), tekrarları ve gereksiz dolgu kelimelerini çıkarın. Ayrıca bir bağlaç kullanarak nedenleri destekleyin ve somut bir örnek verin (ör. hangi salata türünü tercih ettiğiniz).

範例: I like salads because they are healthy and very fresh. In addition, they are quick and easy to make, so I often prepare a Greek salad with tomatoes, cucumber and feta when I’m short on time.

建議: Cevap belirsiz ve çok fazla dolgu sesi içeriyor; ayrıca mantıklı ve spesifik bilgi eksik. Geçmişten bahsederken net bir konu cümlesi kullanın, dolgu kelimelerini azaltın ve belirgin örnekler verin (hangi tatlılar, neden sevdiğiniz). Basit bağlaçlarla destekleyin.

範例: When I was a child I loved sweet desserts. For example, I often ate chocolate cake and ice cream because they tasted rich and comforting.

建議: Cevap olumlu ama karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları var (ör. 'I sometimes eat sushi and sometimes kebab'). Mevsimlere göre farklılıkları daha net bağlayın ve örnekleri mevsimlerle ilişkilendirin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin ve tekrarları çıkarın.

範例: Yes. In summer I prefer light dishes like sushi and salads, while in winter I often eat heavier foods such as kebab and stews because they are warming.

建議: Cevap doğrudan fakat dilbilgisi ve anlam bozuklukları var ('I'm always my kilogram heavy'). Neden değiştiğini mantıklı ve açık şekilde ifade edin; kilo ile ilgili sebebi düzgün bir yapı ile verin. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi ardından bir sebep ekleyin.

範例: Yes, my favourite has changed. I used to eat rice a lot as a child, but now I avoid it because I noticed I gained weight when I ate large portions.

× I really like salads because they are healthy and fresh. And they are make quick and easier so it's I really like.

✓ I really like salads because they are healthy and fresh. They are quick and easy to make, so I really like them.

The sentence has wrong verb form and sentence structure. 'are make' is incorrect; use the adjective phrase 'quick and easy to make'. 'easier' is comparative and needs a comparison object, so use 'easy'. Also 'it's I really like' is ungrammatical; replace with 'so I really like them' for proper object pronoun use and clear meaning. Suggested improvement: Use adjective + to-infinitive for describing how foods are prepared (quick and easy to make). Ensure pronouns match their antecedents (them referring to salads).

× When I was a child, I, I always ate, umm, some desserts because, umm, this uh, tastes like seaweed and, and I really like uh, to chocolate yes, that's kind of like this.

✓ When I was a child, I always ate desserts because some of them tasted like seaweed, and I also really liked chocolate.

Multiple issues: unnecessary filler words removed and verb tense consistency fixed: 'tastes' should be past tense 'tasted' to match 'When I was a child'. 'some desserts' is fine but 'to chocolate' is incorrect; use 'liked chocolate'. Also reorganized for clarity and natural word order. Suggested improvement: Keep tense consistent in past-time narratives and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use 'liked' not 'to like' after 'really'.

× Yes, of course. Uh, for example, I sometimes eat sushi and I'm sometimes kebab. So there are two different foods, but I'm, but I'm eat at different times too. So yes, actually.

✓ Yes, of course. For example, I sometimes eat sushi and sometimes eat kebab. They are two different foods, and I eat them at different times.

'I'm sometimes kebab' is incorrect — 'I'm' (I am) cannot be used before a food; use 'I sometimes eat kebab'. 'I'm eat' mixes forms; use simple present 'I eat'. Replaced 'So there are two different foods' with 'They are two different foods' and added 'them' for proper object reference. Suggested improvement: Use simple present for habitual actions (I sometimes eat ...). Use correct pronouns and avoid contraction errors like 'I'm' when not forming 'I am'.

× Yes, I used to eat rice but now I don't eat so because when I eat some rice and I'm always my kilogram heavy.

✓ Yes, I used to eat rice, but now I don't because when I eat rice I always gain weight.

Tense and verb choice errors: 'I don't eat so' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't' plus reason 'because...'. 'when I eat some rice and I'm always my kilogram heavy' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'I always gain weight' or 'I gain a kilogram'. Use 'gain weight' or 'gain a kilogram' and simple present for habitual effect. Also remove unnecessary 'some' before rice unless specifying an amount. Suggested improvement: Use 'used to' for past habits and 'now I don't' for present negation. Express weight change as 'I gain weight' or 'I gain a kilogram' for clarity.