走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct grammar (use present simple for routines), and add a brief reason or detail. Avoid redundancy and keep it to 1–3 sentences.

範例: Yes. I walk my dog twice a day, in the morning and at night, around my neighborhood. It helps both of us stay active and healthy.

建議: Use past tense consistently, give a clear topic sentence, and provide one specific supporting reason with correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repetition.

範例: No, I didn't. When I was a child I avoided walks because it was usually very hot and I disliked sweating, so I preferred playing indoors.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (for example, also, moreover), and correct vocabulary (digestive system). Give specific reasons and examples concisely.

範例: People enjoy walking in parks for exercise and socialising. For example, they can meet friends and improve their fitness, and a gentle walk after a meal can also aid digestion.

建議: Answer the hypothetical question directly using conditional language, then give a concise reason. Avoid contradictions (saying you don't like long walks when question asks where). If you don't want long walks, say where you would prefer to walk briefly and why.

範例: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along the seaside because the breeze would make it cooler. However, I usually prefer short 10–15 minute walks nearby because Malaysia's heat makes me sweat quickly.

建議: Use past tense to answer 'lately' and be specific about time and place. Provide a clear topic sentence describing where you went, then a brief reason. Avoid mixing future and past and finish sentences clearly.

範例: Lately I went for a short jog around my neighborhood with my dog in the evening because I wanted to stay fit. I usually avoid long walks late at night for safety reasons.

× Yes, every morning and night I will bring my dog for a jogging in my living area.

✓ Yes, every morning and night I take my dog jogging in my neighborhood.

Original uses 'a jogging' which is incorrect because 'jogging' is a gerund activity and does not take the article 'a'. Also 'bring my dog for a jogging' is unnatural; use 'take my dog jogging'. Replace 'living area' with 'neighborhood' for natural collocation. Suggestion: Use verb + -ing correctly as activity nouns without 'a' and prefer natural collocations (take someone jogging).

× No, when I was a child, I don't like to go outside for a walk because the weather is very hot and I will be sweat and I don't like the sweat.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't like to go outside for walks because the weather was very hot and I would sweat, and I didn't like being sweaty.

The time frame is past ('when I was a child') so present verbs 'don't like' must be past 'didn't like'. 'I will be sweat' is incorrect: use 'I would sweat' or 'I was sweaty'; 'sweat' as a verb requires correct tense and 'sweaty' is the adjective. 'I don't like the sweat' becomes 'I didn't like being sweaty'. Suggestion: Maintain past tense consistently and use correct adjective 'sweaty' or 'sweat' as verb forms.

× In my opinion they can meet other friends and make their body healthy.

✓ In my opinion, they can meet other people and keep their bodies healthy.

'Meet other friends' is acceptable but 'other people' is more natural. 'Make their body healthy' is awkward; use 'keep their bodies healthy' or 'improve their health'. Also add comma after introductory phrase. Plural 'bodies' matches plural subject 'they'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'keep healthy' and ensure plural agreement for body -> bodies.

× Beside that, when they work in parks after meals, maybe they can increase the digest system.

✓ Besides that, when they walk in parks after meals, they may improve their digestion.

'Beside that' should be 'Besides that'. 'Work in parks' is incorrect contextually; 'walk in parks' fits. 'Maybe they can' is awkward; 'they may' is better. 'Increase the digest system' is ungrammatical; use 'improve their digestion'. Suggestion: Use correct transitional word 'Besides', correct verb for activity 'walk', and proper noun phrase 'digestion'.

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance? No, I don't like to take a long walk. I maybe I just walk about 10 to 15 minute because the weather is very hot in Malaysia and I will be sweat. I don't like my body feel sweat and.

✓ No, I don't like to take a long walk. I might only walk for about 10 to 15 minutes because the weather is very hot in Malaysia and I would sweat. I don't like my body to feel sweaty.

'I maybe I just walk' is incorrect; use modal 'might' + base verb 'walk' and include 'for' with time duration and plural 'minutes'. 'I will be sweat' is ungrammatical; use 'I would sweat'. 'I don't like my body feel sweat' needs infinitive and adjective: 'I don't like my body to feel sweaty'. Suggestion: Use correct modal forms (might/would), include 'for' with durations, pluralize 'minutes', and use 'sweaty'.

× Later I will bring my dog for a jog because it just after my meal so I can keep my body fit. Beside that I will bring my dog jog in my living area because it was very late already so I will not.

✓ Later I will take my dog for a jog because it is just after my meal, so I can keep my body fit. Also, I will jog my dog in my neighborhood because it is already very late, so I will not go far.

Use 'take my dog for a jog' instead of 'bring my dog for a jog'. 'It just after my meal' needs present 'it is just after my meal'. 'Beside that' -> 'Also' or 'Besides that'. 'Bring my dog jog' is incorrect; use 'take my dog for a jog' or 'jog with my dog'. 'It was very late already so I will not' is incomplete; clarify 'so I will not go far'. Ensure tense and sentence completion. Suggestion: Use correct phrase 'take someone for a jog', correct present tense for immediate time expressions, and complete the final clause.