走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you walk a lot, then give one specific supporting detail (e.g. number of steps) using correct tense and linking words. Avoid hesitations and redundant phrases.

範例: It depends on the situation. I don't walk much at home, but on workdays I usually walk a lot — around 5,000 to 7,000 steps daily, so walking is part of my commuting routine.

建議: Answer directly with clear past-tense grammar. Give one or two specific examples of activities you did as a child and a brief explanation of how often. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to make it coherent.

範例: Yes, I often played outside as a child. For example, I frequently played football and traditional street games with friends after school, so I was active almost every day.

建議: Give a clear, natural reason and avoid incorrect or irrelevant words. Use one topic sentence and two specific supporting reasons with linking words (e.g. 'because', 'also'). Keep vocabulary simple and appropriate.

範例: People like walking in parks because the atmosphere is calm and safe. Also, parks are good for exercise and family time, so many people go there to relax and stay active.

建議: Answer the hypothetical question directly and describe a specific location and reason. Use conditional phrasing ('If I had the chance') and avoid irrelevant details (gym treadmill is not a long walk). Provide one or two concise supporting details.

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside because I enjoy the fresh air and views. For example, I imagine walking two hours on the beach which would be relaxing and good exercise.

建議: Answer clearly about a recent time and place in the past simple tense. State a specific occasion and give one brief reason why you walked (e.g. commuting, exercise). Keep it concise and avoid vague or contradictory phrases.

範例: Lately I walked to work last Thursday because my bus was cancelled. The walk took about 25 minutes and it was a useful way to get some exercise.

× Uh, it's all depend on situation.

✓ Uh, it all depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' in the present tense, so use 'depends'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'situation' for specificity.

× When I was on my home I'm firmly not to walk a lot and when I'm going to for my work for outside of home as usually I'm going to lots of work approximately 5 to 7000 daily steps.

✓ When I am at home I usually do not walk much, but when I go out for work I often walk a lot, approximately 5,000 to 7,000 steps a day.

Incorrect prepositions and sentence structure made this unclear. Use 'at home' not 'on my home', 'do not walk much' for negation, and 'go out for work' for going outside. Use 'often' or 'usually' consistently; write numbers with commas and 'a day' for frequency.

× Yes, in when I was child I commonly lots of playing sports and other ritual games.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often played sports and other traditional games.

Use past tense 'played' for actions in the past. Include the article 'a' before 'child'. Replace 'commonly lots of playing' with 'often played' and 'ritual' with 'traditional' for natural meaning.

× Well days of games I went playing and commonly various steps are doing and I'm not a sense of this.

✓ On days when we played games I used to play a lot and walk many steps without noticing it.

Rewrite for clarity: use 'On days when we played games' and 'used to play' or 'played' for habitual past. 'Walk many steps' expresses 'various steps are doing' correctly, and 'without noticing it' replaces 'I'm not a sense of this'.

× Park is a take place where each and every people of diarrhea become to come and spend their time with their family and also doing some exercise or Walking Dead because park provider is such a grateful environment for each and every people.

✓ A park is a place where people come to spend time with their families, exercise, or relax because the park provides a pleasant environment for everyone.

Many wrong words and prepositions: use 'a park' and 'a place', 'people' (not 'people of diarrhea'), 'families' plural, 'exercise or relax' instead of 'Walking Dead', and 'provides' as the verb. 'Pleasant' is more natural than 'grateful' here.

× Told me I think it's a good question, but I'm commonly doing for a long walk.

✓ That's a good question, but I do not often take long walks.

'Told me' is incorrect in context; use 'That's'. Use negative phrasing 'do not often take' to match intended meaning and correct verb 'take a walk' or 'take long walks'.

× I'm generally going into the gym.

✓ I generally go to the gym.

Use 'go to the gym' rather than 'going into the gym'. Use simple present 'go' for habitual action.

× I minimum spend 20 minutes to 30 minutes on a treadmill for my strength.

✓ I spend at least 20 to 30 minutes on the treadmill to build my strength.

Use 'at least' for minimum, '20 to 30 minutes' with 'on the treadmill', and 'to build my strength' for purpose. 'Minimum spend' is unidiomatic.

× No, I'm not going for only for work, but for work I'm sadly going for lately.

✓ No, I don't walk only for work, but recently I have been walking more because of work.

Use present simple 'don't walk' for general habit and present perfect progressive 'have been walking' for recent ongoing activity. 'Sadly' is odd here; replace with 'recently' to indicate time.

× Walking is just a part of my life but not my life. So walking is a temporarily for me not doing as regularly.

✓ Walking is one part of my life but not my whole life. So walking is temporary for me and not something I do regularly.

Clarify meaning: 'one part of my life' and 'not my whole life'. Use 'temporary' (adjective) and say 'not something I do regularly' for natural phrasing.